Skills in continuation writing 课件-2024届高三英语一轮复习

Tips for continuation writing Some general concepts What makes a good story? Writing a good article is just like to be a good man: You should have a noble soul, a strong body and suitable clothes. Three principles to evaluate a continuation writing 评估 1. From the plots 2. From the details 合情合理（真善美、积极向上） 生动具体/跌宕起伏+合乎逻辑+文风一致 3.From the expressions 丰富准确的表达 三原则：正能量，一致性，曲折性 Step 1 Step 2 Step 3 Step 4 Step 5 研读文本，寻找冲突 确定主题，围绕核心 揣测首句，预测情节 关注伏笔，高度融合 解决冲突，升华主题 Steps for continuing your story 4 读后续写高分要素 1. 眼前一亮的书写卷面 2. 情节合理，衔接过渡自然， 3. 内容可读性强，创造性、逻辑性、丰富性、合理性 4. 生动的动作和贴切的心理描写+环境衬托+少许对话 5. 丰富具体生动高级的语言表达 6. 积极和有意义的结尾（解决冲突） How to make your continuation writing vivid? 题材 题材 Skill 1 ：Show, don’t tell 1. 动作描写 动作链：使用一连串动作让画面动起来 He died/is dead/passed away. He lay still on the ground without a breath, his heart not beating any more. 动作描写 –动作链 题材 题材 例1: ①Fortunately, he threw me a branch and pulled me out. ②He lay on his stomach, pushed the branch before him and wound his way towards me. I grabbled the branch with care and was ultimately dragged out of the ice water. Action1 Action2 Skill1:并列动作-并列谓语动词表示（动词时态要一致） Action3 Action4 Action5 妈妈抱着孩子. 形成动作链: 冲向前 蹲下来 一把抱住 Mum dashed forward, knelt down and gathered the kid into her arms. Create an action chain Sub. +V1, V2 and(then) V3 Mum hugged the kid tightly. Mum gave the kid a (tight) hug. 她拥抱了Betty. (失散多年的老朋友） She dashed forward， gathered Betty into her arms and burst into tears. 冲上去-- 抱住她-- 流下眼泪-- dash forward hug/ gather her into her arms burst into tears 上车？ get into the car get on the bus She stopped a car , got into it and told the driver her destination. Skill 1: Create an action chain : Sub. +V1, V2 and V3 “我去救公主” 我要带上最好的剑 翻过最高的山 穿过最深的树林 把公主带回来 动作少怎么办？ 我带上最好的剑 翻过最高的山 闯入最深的森林 把公主带回 I climbed over the highest mountain, found my way into the deep forest and brought back the princess.