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Period Ⅳ Writing
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Part 1 单元写作任务:介绍一处景点
地点或旅游景点介绍类的作文属于说明文,写此类文章时应注意以下几点:
1.写作内容通常包括地理位置、面积、人口、气候特征、历史、特产等。也可适当融入人文风貌,简单介绍该地区的民间风俗及人们的生活方式等,但要抓住该地区的主要特征,描写详略得当。
2.写作时要遵循一定的顺序。描写时找准切入点,再由这个点展开(时间或空间顺序)。
3.时态常用一般现在时,人称常用第三人称。
4.注意行文的连贯性,句子之间、段落之间要衔接紧密,过渡自然,可用一些常用关联词或词组来体现这种逻辑性。
常用表达:
1.介绍某地所处的地理位置及以什么闻名等,常用词汇:
①be located/situated in,lie in,in the north of,to the east of
②be just like,look like,as beautiful as a flower,be compared to
③be famous/wellknown as/for
2.介绍某地的面积、人口及气候等,常用语句:
①It covers an area of about ...square kilometers.
②Its area is ...square kilometers.
③It has a population of ...
④Its population is ...
⑤The average temperature is ...
⑥The hottest months are ...
3.介绍某地的风景、名胜等,常用语句:
①It has many places of interest,such as ...
②They make the city a tourist attraction both at home and abroad ...
③It's a wonderful place with ...
④It really deserves the name of ...
写作模板:
Located in__________,__________ is one of the world's five famous __________.
__________ mainly consists of __________ and their tops are ________, so they are named “________”. The peaks are heavy with __________ all the year round and __________are surrounded with __________, making it a famous__________. There are __________ now. There used to be at least __________.__________is not only famous for __________, but also for __________, __________and__________.
It's really a great tourist attraction to visit.
假定你是秦皇岛市的一名中学生李华,请根据以下要点向准备来你校当交换生的英国同学介绍一下位于秦皇岛旅游区的著名的河北海滨国家森林公园。
要点:
1.位于秦皇岛市北戴河区,占地1 600多公顷;
2.森林茂密,栖息着多种珍稀动物,鸟类380余种,占河北省鸟类总数的90%多;
3.欢迎游览。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:公顷hectare
审题谋篇:
第一步 明确要求
该写作属于介绍景点的写作,故要用第三人称来写;文章的主题内容是介绍河北海滨国家森林公园,时态用一般现在时。
第二步 确定段落
本篇作文可以从以下几个方面入手:
Para.1 简要介绍该森林公园的位置,然后详细介绍其占地面积、鸟类的多样性等;
Para.2 总结上文:森林公园值得一看。
第三步 核心词汇
1.be_located_in位于
2.amount_of数量
3.appeal_to_tourists吸引游客
4.be_known_for因……而众所周知
第四步 句式升级
1.Hebei Coastal National Forest Park is located in Beidaihe District,Qinhuangdao City.It is an incredible tourist attraction in