主题05 遇险救援（读后续写主题原版阅读&续写训练）

主题05 遇险救援 Part 1主题介绍 “遇险”话题类的续写通常描写主人公遇到自然灾害或者某种意外被困，经过自救或者他救最终脱离了险境，从而产生了新的感悟。 Part 2 主题原版阅读 Through the Ice 在我们明尼苏达农场的红色大谷仓后面约半英里的地方，有一个四周满是淤泥、已经腐烂发臭的池塘。也就是在那里，我学会了从此要好好保护自己。那是一个冬天，池塘结了冰，哥哥哈里便怂恿我穿过池塘，为我们接下来的溜冰“开路”。出于对哥哥的讨好和对滑冰的期待，我开始一步步往池塘中心试探。很不幸，冰面突然“咔嚓”一声，我掉进了冰窟。我被卡在冰面上，肩膀以下的身子全都浸在冰水中。带着满脑子的死亡恐惧，我一次又一次努力挣扎着爬上冰面，但冰层一次又一次无情地裂开。我无助地望向哈里，哈里却在岸上纹丝不动。听到我求助的尖叫，他这才回过神，拖来一根橡树枝把我从冰窟里解救出来。我拖着浸透的套鞋，浑身湿淋淋地进了家门，哈里也因此受到了训斥。但他似乎并没有把这件事放在心上，依旧怂恿我做危险的事情。但我已经学会了拒绝，因为经过那一次的冰窟事件，我觉得没有什么能比生命还重要。 About a half-mile behind the big red barn1 on our Minnesota2 farm lay a pond.In summer, my brother Harry and I would run through a stand3 of oak trees to skip stones there.The pond wore a collar4 of black mud. It was not a place for swimming. In late summer,the pond would be covered by a green and bubbly5 scum6. Sometimes a stench7 rose from it.We stayed away. When winter came,the pond was once again an inviting8 place. One day when ice covered it, Harry said to me,“Try walking across.” The ice looked solid9.No water showed through it,but I hesitated10. “Go ahead,Sis11,”Harry urged12.“Try it. You're lighter than I am. If the ice holds,we can run and slide on it. It'll be fun.” I wanted to please Harry,and I thought about the fun of a long slide on the ice.I began to take gliding13 steps across the pond. In the middle of the pond, the ice gave way with a sudden crack! I flung out14 my arms.The next thing I knew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in the ice by arms outstretched15 on the ice.From my shoulders down I hung in icy water. I thought of the bottom of the pond. I knew it would be black and awful down there,full of silt16 and rotting vegetation and maybe slimy17 creatures. I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass. Again and again I tried to get out.Again and again the ice shattered18.The hole widened.I was wearing a coat of heavy material called plush19.As it became soaked,it dragged me down.I tired of the struggle and rested