UNIT 1 Section 5Writing-【赢在微点】轻松课堂2023-2024学年新教材高中英语必修第一册（人教版2019）

Section 5　Writing—建议信 题型解读 谋篇思路 建议信是写给某人,就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议的应用文,有时是写给某一组织就其服务改进方面提出建议和忠告。建议信应目的明确,合情合理。 首段:说明对方所提到或涉及的问题。 主体段落:陈述具体的建议和理由。 尾段:希望建议被考虑和采纳。 积满分素材 　 ■ 夺人眼球开头句 1.Since/Now that you are worried about how to choose suitable courses, I􀆳m writing to/I􀆳d like to offer some suggestions about how to ... 因为你担心如何选择合适的课程,我写信/我想就如何……提些建议。 2.I am sorry to learn/know/hear that you are now having trouble/difficulty communicating with others. 知道/听到你现在在与他人交流方面有些麻烦/困难, 我很难过。 3.Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you. 这里有一些建议可以帮助你。 ■ 亮点出彩篇中句 1.Why not join a volunteer club? If you do this, you can not only help others but also make friends. 为什么不参加一个志愿者俱乐部?如果你这样做的话, 你不仅能帮助他人也会交到朋友。 2.In addition, it would be a good idea/a wise choice if you read a book or listen to music. 另外,如果你看书或听音乐,这将会是个不错的主意/明智的选择。 3.I􀆳d like to recommend/suggest/advise that you should sign up for the present subjects. 我建议你报名参加现在的课程。 4.Only in this way will you improve your Chinese and speak it more fluently. 只有用这种方式,你才能提高汉语并更流利地讲汉语。 5.As to how to get along well with your classmates, you should remember that kindness is the most important. 至于如何与同学相处,你应该记住,友善最重要。 ■ 韵味无穷结尾句 1.I hope you will find these ideas useful/practical/helpful. 我希望你会发现这些办法有用/实用/有帮助。 2.Hope my advice will be of some help to you. 希望我的建议对你有所帮助。 3.I am certain that if you follow my advice, you􀆳ll keep up with your classmates. 我相信,如果你听从我的建议,你会赶上同学们的。 背满分模板 Dear 　　　　,  You wrote that you are having trouble 　　　　　　　　(问题). I understand how you are feeling now. As for how to change the situation, I􀆳d like to give you some advice.  Firstly, I recommend you 　　　　　　　　(建议一). Besides, you􀆳d better 　　　　　　　　(建议二), so 　　　　　　　　　(说明理由). What􀆳s more, it would be a good idea 　　　　　　　　　(建议三). By doing so, 　　　　　　　　(理由).  Hope my advice will be of some help to you. Yours, Li Hua 练写作规范 　　假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom不得不居家学习,但又经常和父母争吵,他发来email向你寻求帮助,如何解决这个问题。请你给他回邮件,内容包括:1.时间要用在学习上;2.注意形成好的作息习惯;3.还要适当地做些家务。 注意:写作词数应为80左右。 第一步:认真审题　谋篇布局 体裁