内容正文:
Unit 2 Our Animal Friends
单元话题满分范文必背
一、书信作文
1.Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点不占格)
假设你是Alice,你想领养上文的Sunday Special,请给收容所写一份信,说明你为什么想收养它,收养之后你会如何照顾它。
Reference phrases
feed him 3—4 times every day
give him a bowl of water to drink
give him a blanket
play with him
Dear officers,
I read Sunday Special’s letter and my heart was touched. I would like to adopt the puppy. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Alice
【答案】例文
Dear officers,
I read Sunday Special’s letter and my heart was touched. I would like to adopt the puppy.
When I was a little child, we kept a lovely pet dog in our family. I know how to look after a puppy and I really want to give the poor animal a warm home.
After I take him home, first of all, I will give him a blanket and make a comfortable bed for him to sleep on. Secondly, I will feed him 3 to 4 times a day. Of course, I will never forget to give him a bowl of water to drink. Thirdly, I will also prepare some toys for him to play with. When I get home from school, I will play with him.
I’m sure I can take good care of him and he will be very happy to be one of our family members.
Yours truly,
Alice
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封申请信,属于书信作文写作;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:文章开头以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,不要遗漏提示中的“你为什么想收养它”这一要点,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接书信开头,引出话题;
第二步,先说明想收养小狗的原因,再按照要点提示说明你收养它后会如何照顾它,可列举具体的事例;
第三步,表示能照顾好小狗并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②prepare sth for sb为某人准备某物
③take good care of照顾好……
[高分句型]
①When I was a little child, we kept a lovely pet dog in our family.(when引导时间状语从句)
②After I take him home, first of all, I will give him a blanket and make a comfortable bed for him to sleep on.(after引导时间状语从句)
③I’m sure I can take good care of him and he will be very hap