读后续写练习写作讲义-2024届高三英语一轮复习
读后续写
试题原题
第二节：读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Though I eat an apple almost every day, one month ago my doctor came to my house standing in front of me, not being kept away, due to my sudden illness.
“Well Jian, I think I need to have a strong talk with you. You are overweight. Have you ever heard about Body Mass Index (指数), BMI? Well, I’ve weighed you and measured your height and you have a BMI of 28. That is obese(肥胖的),” said the doctor.
I knew I was a little bit overweight but I didn’t think it was that bad. He added that my name means healthy in Chinese and he thought it is time that I should become healthy. There is a direct link between my health and sport. So he asked me, “How much sport do you do every week?”
I told him that I go for a walk every weekend. Then he replied, “Hmm, that’s not a lot. Sport and health go together. They affect your mental, physical and emotional health. For example, sport can improve your mental health, allowing your brain to think better and focus. It will help you to learn more easily. Is that clear, Jian?”
“I think so. I know it would be good to be able to concentrate better at school.” I said.
The doctor explained to me that from a physical point of view, sport makes us tired so helps us to sleep better. At the same time, sport burns off the calories that we have consumed. It builds muscle and improves our circulation (血液循环). Sport helps to control our cholesterol count(胆固醇指标) and this is important to stop us having a heart attack. Additionally, it also keeps our blood pressure normal and strengthens our bones.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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The doctor’s words left me lost in thought.
“Exercising alone is hard. Why not: try some team sports?” the doctor suggested.
试题分析
1. 主要人物
☞ I：overweight
☞ the doctor：gives good advice in joining in sports
2. 前文情节
虽然平时都注意健康饮食，但一个月前因为突然生病，医生来到我跟前说我超重要减肥了，然后跟我说了好多体育运动的好处。于是，我......
3. 续写安排
第一段：The doctor’s words left me lost in thought.
①（与前一句衔接）我是怎么想的
②我接下去有什么行动
③（与下文开头句衔接）锻炼很枯燥，打算放弃。于是，问医生找对策
第二段：“Exercising alone is hard. Why not: try some team sports?” the doctor suggested.
①（与前一句衔接）于是，听从医生建议去参加团队性运动
②效果不错
③（主题升华）反思锻炼之路
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下水作文
The doctor’s words left me lost in thought. Indeed, lack of exercise is what I felt ashamed of. Sometimes, seeing others doing exercise happily, I had some thoughts of doing the same as them. But the result was that I always had the excuses of putting off the so-called plan of exercise. Now the doctor’s words dragged me into the decision that I had to show my great concern for my health. I picked up jogging as the easiest way to keep myself fit. However, a week later, I had to turn to my doctor, for no fun of exercising was found. (94 words)
“Exercising alone is hard. Why not: try some team sports?” the doctor suggested. As an introvert, I showed no interest in joining others for the workout. But with the doctor’s encouragement, I finally decided to have a try for the sake of my health. Contacting with a local running club, I was shocked by their enthusiasm, accepting me without any thoughts. People in the club were so easy-going that I had no difficulty in stepping out of my comfort zone. Every day we gathered and ran along the beautiful lake, enjoying and sharing the marvelous time. Thanks to my doctor, not only did I improve my health but I harvested precious friendship. (99 words)
参考范文
The doctor’s words left me lost in thought. I realized that I needed to take my health more seriously and make some changes to my lifestyle. I started to look into different sports and exercises that I could do to improve my health. I also began to pay more attention to my diet, cutting out unhealthy foods and replacing them with healthier alternatives. I knew that it wouldn’t be easy, but I was determined to make a change. (70 words)
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