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应英文练习写作之

 

求助信

试题原题

第四部分：写作（共两节,满分40分）

第一节：应用文写作（满分15分）

      假设你是李华，刚进入高三，在英语学习上遇到了困难。请你给外教Mr. Brown写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

      1.说明困难；

      2.寻求帮助。

注意：

      1.写作词数应为80左右；

      2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

 

Dear Mr. Brown,

   I’m Li Hua, one of your students.                                    

                                                 

                                                 

                       Yours sincerely,

                               Li Hua

 

试题分析

1.这是一封求助信，就进入高三后在英语学习上遇到的困难向外教Mr. Brown求助。

 

2.写作内容：

①困难：在做阅读理解题目时，经常出现选择错误情况；写作上如何提升

②求助：希望能得到具体的指点和帮助

③（增加内容）：希望能得到Mr. Brown的指导

 

下水作文

Dear Mr. Brown,

   I’m Li Hua, one of your students. After entering Senior Grade Three, I’m encountering problems in English learning. That’s why I’m writing for your help.

   What puzzles me most is how to improve myself in reading comprehension. When I’m doing that kind of reading exercises, I always choose the wrong choice between the left two, though I feel I’ve understood the meaning of the whole passage. Writing is my another concern. I can’t have a good performance in writing. Sometimes I can’t find beautiful words or suitable sentences to polish my writing.

   Waiting for your face-to-face guidance. Thanks! (91 words)

                 Yours sincerely,

                      Li Hua

 

参考范文

 

Dear Mr. Brown,

  I am Li Hua, one of your students. Entering the 12th grade, I come across some problems about English learning. Therefore, I am writing to seek your guidance.

  My biggest problem is how to do well in listening tasks. Native English speakers can talk so fast that I can hardly catch any words, not to mention the main idea. I also have trouble with remembering new words. Hard as I attempt to memorize them, they seem to disappear from my mind sometime later.