2024届高三英语一轮复习读后续写 雨中登山 课件

读后续写 ——雨中爬山赏美景 Edun did not want to go on a hike. She especially did not want to go on a long hike in the mountains that led to a tiny cabin(小木屋) with no electricity and no running water. She wanted to stay home reading a book instead while wrapped in a warm blanket. “Ready?” Mom asked cheerfully after breakfast. Edun looked out the window and only saw rain, lots of it. “We should go another day,” Edun suggested. “Maybe a hundred years from now.” She worried she would get tired on the hike. She worried about getting bored at the dark cabin. Mom said it was time to stop worrying and get into the car. Edun’s brother, Will, was waiting in the garage, who wore a camera around his neck. Will was four years older than Edun and had climbed many more mountains. He’d started hiking when he was two and loved it. Because it was raining, Edun had to wear her rain pants, her rain hat, her rain jacket, and her waterproof boots. Her jacket had a rough material on the inside. She didn’t like how it felt against her skin. After about half an hour’s drive, they parked at a trailhead(登山口). The rain had stopped but the ground was still dripping wet. “We’ll be there by afternoon!” Mom promised. The afternoon sounded far away. Will identified a bird sitting on a nearby branch - “Fox sparrow!”- then he raced down the trail and was soon out of sight. Edun rested under a pine tree. “You can’t force me to walk,” Edun said. “You‘re right,” said her mom smilingly, standing under the tree, too, “But you will never know what may lie ahead and amaze us.” 三招 审题 第一招：前文分析抓要点 第二招：线索分析看导图 They arrived at cabin and watched the stars happily. 通过阅读所给文章可知，艾顿刚开始因小屋条件艰苦，不想和家人一起登山，而且看到外面的大雨，艾顿担心旅行会让人疲惫厌烦，但在妈妈劝说下，终究还是上车开启登山之旅。一家人到达登山口,雨已停下，艾顿兴致依然不高。登山途中,虽然艾顿的哥哥威尔看到树上的小动物非常兴奋，可艾顿却在休息后不想再继续前进，妈妈安慰说前面会有惊奇的事情等待他们。 情节发展线 Edun did not want to go on a hike. 情感变化线 worried Persuaded by her mother, Edun reached the trailhead. reluctant Edun rested under a pine tree and refused to go on. Mom tried to stimulate her