内容正文:
Section 5 Writing a letter to express ideas
题型解读
谋篇布局
表达观点的信件是一种将议论文和应用文结合在一起的文体, 在书信中陈述自己的观点和看法
首段:说明现象
主体段落:说明这种现象发生或存在的理由
尾段:表达自己的看法和希望
积满分佳句
■ 夺人眼球开头句
1.Recently, the problem of ... has attracted peoples attention.最近,……的问题引起了人们的注意。
2.It is a common phenomenon in society that people are getting politer than they used to be.人们比过去更有礼貌,这是社会上的普遍现象。
3.Nowadays there exists a phenomenon of ...现在存在一种……的现象。
■ 亮点出彩篇中句
1.The phenomenon exists for a number of reasons as follows.之所以出现这种现象,有下述多种原因。
2.The phenomenon of ... is brought about/caused by both ... and ...……的现象是由……和……引起的。
3.The reasons behind it are mainly as follows.主要有以下几个原因。
■ 韵味无穷结尾句
1.From my point of view, it is important to value those traditions and customs.在我看来,重视传统和风俗很重要。
2.In my opinion/view, health is more important than wealth.我认为健康比财富更重要。
3.I hope immediate measures can be taken to stop such a phenomenon happening again.我希望立刻采取措施阻止这样的现象再次发生。
练写作规范
假定你是高一学生李华,发现有不少学生在学校嚼口香糖(gum),请你用英语写一封信给你校校报英文栏目,就此现象发表你的看法。内容包括:1.提出现象;2.学生嚼口香糖的原因;3.你的看法。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
第一步:认真审题 谋篇布局
体裁
人称
时态
要 点 结 构 图
首段
提出学生在校嚼口香糖的现象
应用文(观点信)
第一人称、
第三人称
一般现在时
主体段落
陈述学生嚼口香糖的原因
尾段
表达自己的看法
第二步:斟词酌句 靓化表达
1.现在可以看到很多学生在学校嚼口香糖。(利用被动句+情态动词)
Nowadays many students can be seen chewing gum at school.
2.有关此现象存在有几个原因。
There exist some reasons for such a phenomenon.
3.有些学生认为嚼口香糖能在饭后保持牙齿干净,而且能平静大脑。
Some students think chewing gum can not only keep their teeth clean after a meal but can also calm their minds.
4.有些学生嚼口香糖只是为了好玩。
Some students chew gum just for fun.
5.在我看来,尽管嚼口香糖有一些好处,但是这样做可能有噪音并使其他学生无法集中注意力。
In my opinion, although chewing gum may have some advantages, it can be noisy and makes others unable to concentrate.
6.一些学生把嚼过的口香糖放在桌子底下或地板上,这很难清理。
Some students leave used gum under desks or on floors, and it is hard to clean up.
→Some students leave used gum under desks or on floors, which is hard to clean up. (非限制性定语从句升级)
7.学校不应该允许学生在校嚼口香糖。(情态动词+被动句)
Students shouldnt be allowed to chew gum at