2023年3月苏锡常镇一模人与动物类读后续写学案-2024届高三英语一轮复习

读后续写  人与动物类（蜂鸟被困蛛网）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.

With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.

When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty?

As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.

Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.

During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.”

注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

Para1: A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.____________________________

Para2: I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared._________________

一 读懂原文

1. 叙事视角 第 一 人称

2 故事梗概  I was invited to a cookout on a friend’s farm, where I found a humming bird trapped in spider-webs of a milking house was trying to escape. I saved her and took her out. But she was unwilling to leave, just hovering. After a long time, she finally flew away. I told the host the incident and they promised to fix the window through which the bird flew by accident. When I was departing, the hummingbird came again and began hovering.

3续写主题 人与自然：人与动物之间的趣事,体现人与自然的和谐。

4 情感变化   

A: It was a humming bird, desperately trying to escape. _______________

B: She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.(Para.1) ______________

C: I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole...closing the door securely behind me. (Para.2) ____________

D: I told my host the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. (para5) ___________

E: She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone.   (para5)  __________

二 推理续写情节

  Para1: A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.

Q1: Why did I come back to the farm?  Q2: What did I do then?

Q3: Did I expect to see the hummingbird again before departure?

  Para2: I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.

Q1: What did the hummingbird do? Q2: How did I feel and what did I do afterwards?

Q3: Theme/Ending?

para1: 我又去了农场--______________---___________________--- ____________