Unit 1 Teenage Life Reading for Writing 建议信写作课件-2022-2023学年高中英语人教版(2019)必修第一册
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Unit 1 Teenager Life
Period 4 Reading for Writing
Cyber Addiction
Bullying
Smoking
Lack of support from family
Depression
Lead in
What do these pictures show?
Peer-Pressure
Have you ever thought of writing to an adviser for teenagers for advice?
What advice will you give if you have friends with such problems?
A student nicknamed “Worried friend” wrote a letter asking for advice to Susan Luo, who is an adviser for teenagers. Let's read Ms Luo's reply .
昵称
Predict: What kind of writing will it be?
A letter of advice. 建议信
Important words:
anxious behaviour generation
attract focus/concentrate on
become/be addicted to sth
I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.
You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time....
I recommend that you talk to your friend...
I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.
It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.
But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.
假定你是李华,最近收到了你的朋友Bob的来信。他在信中说,进入高中后,他不能适应高中的学习生活,在学习 上也遇到了障碍,因而情绪低落,甚至有了放弃的想法。请你给他回信,内容如下:
1. 向Bob表示问候和安慰;2. 针对他的问题提出建议。要点如下: (1) 在高中要了解正确的学习方法,并学会把知识转化为能力; (2) 上课认真听讲,遇到问题及时向老师和同学求助; (3) 不要丧失信心。
注意: 1. 词数120左右; 2. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
What’s the tpye of the letter?
It’s a letter of advice
A letter of advice should include the four parts:
1. I know what the problem is.
2. I understand how you feel.
3. This is my advice and reason (s).
4. I think my advice will help.
点明问题
表示理解
提出建议
表达愿望
文章开头
文章主体段
文章结尾
应用文写作一共分成 3 段
I. know what the problem is.
2. I understand how you feel.
3. The purpose why I write to you.
第一段:写作背景+写信目的
思考:写作背景的核心是什么?
How’s Bob’s feeling in the background?
已知状况——表示共情
第一段:1.写作背景+共情:(何为共情?)
我知道你在进入高中后心情低落,我理解你的感受。我相信其他学生也有像你一样的感觉,所以刚开始请不要太过焦虑。
You felt bad after entering