内容正文:
Unit 2 Saving the Earth
单元话题满分范文必背
一、材料作文
1.(2023秋·福建龙岩·九年级统考期中)假如你是李华,近日你校正在开展建设绿色校园的活动,校英文报现面向全校学生征文,请大家谈谈校园中存在的一些环保问题。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文进行投稿。
要求:(1) 要点齐全、语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范;
(2) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 字数80词 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
The Green School Project has become part of the environmental education in our school. However, there are still some problems. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
The Green School Project has become part of the environmental education in our school. However, there are still some problems. Some students throw away soft drink bottles. And some students leave the water running or lights on. They are both a waste of energy.
In order to solve these problems, it’s necessary to make students realize the importance of environmental protection. For example, we can put up some posters or give some speeches to stop littering. Also, we can encourage students to do small things like saving water and paper. What’s more, we should always remember to turn off the lights when we leave the classroom.
I think it’s important to build a green school because a beautiful school environment makes everyone happy and comfortable. I believe our school will become better and better if we try our best.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作提示已给出,注意不要遗漏关键问题,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,描述校园存在的环境问题;
第二步,提出具体的办法来解决这些问题;
第三步,说明建设绿色校园的重要性,祝福校园环境在大家的努力下越来越好。
[亮点词汇]
①throw away扔掉
②a waste of energy浪费能源
③In order to为了
④put up张贴
⑤turn off关闭
[高分句型]
①It’s necessary to make students realiz