Unit 2 单元话题满分范文必背-2023-2024学年九年级英语上册单元重难点易错题精练（仁爱科普版）

Unit 2 Saving the Earth

单元话题满分范文必背

一、材料作文

1．（2023秋·福建龙岩·九年级统考期中）假如你是李华，近日你校正在开展建设绿色校园的活动，校英文报现面向全校学生征文，请大家谈谈校园中存在的一些环保问题。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文进行投稿。

要求：(1) 要点齐全、语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范；

(2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

(3) 字数80词 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。

The Green School Project has become part of the environmental education in our school. However, there are still some problems. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文：

The Green School Project has become part of the environmental education in our school. However, there are still some problems. Some students throw away soft drink bottles. And some students leave the water running or lights on. They are both a waste of energy.  

In order to solve these problems, it’s necessary to make students realize the importance of environmental protection. For example, we can put up some posters or give some speeches to stop littering. Also, we can encourage students to do small things like saving water and paper. What’s more, we should always remember to turn off the lights when we leave the classroom.

I think it’s important to build a green school because a beautiful school environment makes everyone happy and comfortable. I believe our school will become better and better if we try our best.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作提示已给出，注意不要遗漏关键问题，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，承接开头，描述校园存在的环境问题；

第二步，提出具体的办法来解决这些问题；

第三步，说明建设绿色校园的重要性，祝福校园环境在大家的努力下越来越好。

[亮点词汇]

①throw away扔掉

②a waste of energy浪费能源

③In order to为了

④put up张贴

⑤turn off关闭

[高分句型]

①It’s necessary to make students realize the importance of environmental protection.(it作形式主语的句型)

②What’s more, we should always remember to turn off the lights when we leave the classroom.(含有时间状语从句的复合句)

2．（2023·福建福州·福建省福州铜盘中学校考模拟预测）六月，全国节能宣传周和全国低碳日活动的主题是“践行节能低碳，建设美丽家园”。请以“共建文明城市，低碳生活我先行”为主题，根据以下要点提示，写一篇倡议书。词数80左右。

主题	Let’s create a civilized city together
具体做法	ways	benifits
	1.ride, walk	reduce, save...
	2.throw, spit	clean...
	3.plant	beautiful, environment...
你的建议	联系生活实际提出至少2条合理的建议。

注意事项：

1）根据要点提示，可适当发挥（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3）文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。

Let’s create a civilized city together

As middle school students, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city.

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【答案】例文：

Let’s create a civilized city together

As middle school students, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city.

We can reduce air pollution by riding bikes or walking. It can also save energy. We mustn’t throw rubbish or spit anywhere. In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a comfortable life. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the environment and make our city beautiful.

In my daily life, I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. I can turn off the lights when leaving the room. Actions speak louder than words. Let’s take an active part in creating a civilized city.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：本文的时态以一般现在时为主；

③提示：注意具体做法要点已给出，注意衔接顺畅，建议不能少于两点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，总述建造一个文明的城市是我们的责任；

第二步，详细说如何做；