内容正文:
先来看下应用文题干7
假定你是校学生会主席李华,你校将于下周展以Labor is the Most Bcautiful'"为
主题的劳动周活动,请你以学生会的名义发起倡议。内容包括:
1.学生目前对劳动的态度:
2.劳动的意义:
3.呼吁参加。
学生目前对劳动的态度T
我这边提供一个「总分结构」&「并列结构」的小思路,当然这也是很多同学会
写到的方案。
Students'attitudes towards labor vary/differ.∥【总】Some students may view labor
as tedious or uninteresting,while others may recognize its value and importance./
【分】
口口「总」一个小短句,突出动词功底。
DD「分」并列结构,通过while前后对比展示学生对劳动的不同态度。这种句
型能够清晰地表达出学生之间态度的分歧和多样性。在这里恰到好处,并能突出
句型功底。
当然这个总分结构我们也可以处理成这样:
There is a range of attitudes among students towards labor.f∥【总】Some
students perceive labor as a burden,while others see it as an opportunity for growth
and development..∥【分】
总句因为是个小短句,要么是主谓宾要么就是主系表。如果能想到主谓宾的结构,
则尽量优先选择主谓宾,因为verbs of action比verbs of existence或者verbs of
possession会更加灵动。
00重要Tp:
在应用文写作的过程中,「短长结合」是一个基本思路,短句展现自己的动词储
备,长句则展现出合理使用句型的能力。
我这边也提供了几个变体,供大家参考。
Students'attitudes towards labor vary,from those who view it as
uninteresting to those who recognize its value and significance.
这里也是处理成「总分结构」,在「分」的部分使用了fom…to.的结构,同
样也能表达出学生对劳动态度的多样性,并突出态度之间的极端差异性。
There is a range of attitudes among students towards labor,(with some showing
indifference and others expressing appreciation for its importance).
这里也是处理成「总分结构」,在「分」的部分采用了wth引导的描述性的结
构,也能达到同样的效果。
大家可以根据自己的喜好,选择12种方案积累即可。
劳动的意义T
关于表达「某个东西或某件事情在某些方面有意义」,给大家提供几个常见的句
型:
Labor exerts a positive impact on sb.by doing sth...
Labor holds great meaning as it allows sb.to do sth...
Labor plays a vital role in doing...
The significance of labor lies in its ability to do...
那么,劳动在哪些层面有意义?意义是什么呢?
这边给大家提供一个「二分法」&「层层递进」的小思路。
从「二分法」的角度说,1个人→2社区→3社会,这三层既可以单独写一层,
也可以桃选两层或者三层。
那我这边就选了三层给大家做个演示:
Labor exerts a positive impact on individuals by fostering personal growth,on
communities by promoting social cohesion,and on society as a whole by driving
economic progress and well-being.
呼吁参加T
As the Student Union President,I kindly and sincerely urge all students to
wholeheartedly participate in the upcoming Labor Week event.Let us unite and
joyfully celebrate the profound beauty