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On a late afternoon,Brandon finished feeding his cows on the farm and decided to go
back with his two sons,Louie,6,and Everett,3.As they headed for the house,the
two boys ran ahead of their father.Suddenly Brandon was aware he forgot to close the
door of the barn ()He told the boys to wait for him at the gate and returned to
lock it.When he was at the gate minutes later,he saw only his youngest son.
"Where's Louie?"he shouted.
"He fell in the hole!"Everett said.
Brandon quickly realized what had happened.Noooo,he thought.Louie can barely
swim!He ran to the well and heard Louie splashing,trying not to.Instinctively,he
jumped in.
Somehow Brandon managed to grab on to a pipe that ran down the side of the well,
which slowed his fall and kept him from crushing (his son.
Finally Brandon hit the freezing water at the bottom of the well.He popped his head
out of the water and grabbed Louie,who was panicking and trying to stay afloat in
water that was too deep for either of them to stand.Knowing they could tread (
for only so long,Brandon lifted his son onto his chest as he packed his own back
against the narrow walls for support.
"All right,Dad,you can pull us out now."Louie said.
If only it were that easy.There was no way he could climb out.The pipe that he'd
grabbed during his fall was too slippery to be of any use.There was only one way out.
Looking up to see Everett peering down at them from the top of the well,Brandon
shouted,"Everett,you're going to have to be a big boy and save us.Run to the road
and stand by the mailbox until someone stops.Tell them we need help."
Everett did as he was told.He stood alone by the side of the road,waving to stop
someone.
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After a while,Chris and Mark,nearby farmers,were driving by the farm.
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Twenty minutes later,.Louie emerged(出现),then Brandon,both cold and wet.救人
后的桥段已经是续写的第二段了,得呼应主题了。
我们罗列下文章中出现的角色和重要桥段:
父亲和大儿子(大儿子落井,父亲营救失败)
小儿子(小儿子路边求救)
开车路过的Chris and Mark(好心邻居实施救援)
总结一下:父跃井救长子,仰赖次子寻援。好心邻居路过,随即携手相救。