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读后续写原文 Walking alone on a remote beach in southwest Florida,I was surprised to hear splashes and a deep sigh coming from the water just offshore. As I looked in the direction of the sounds,the rounded gray back of a sea creature rose amid a red froth )rolled at the surface,then sank back into the Gulf. Moments later a broad nose appeared and exhaled in a loud breath.It was a manatee ()and by the looks of the reddish-colored water and the way it was moving,it was in trouble. I had often watched manatees in these warm coastal waters,but I'd never seen one act like this before.Usually just their big noses appeared for a gulp of air as they fed on sea grasses or swam slowly to greener underwater grasslands.But I also knew how common it was for these giants to be injured by boat propellers or caught in crab traps. I wanted to help,but what could I do?There was no one else on the beach,and I didn' t have my phone with me. Throwing my beach bag onto the sand,I began moving toward the animal,who continued to writhe as if in pain.I was still only waist deep when I came close enough to make out the manatee's nose as it moved up out of the sea.Then,to my surprise,a second nose,much smaller,poked up beside it. I pushed on through the see water,but now the manatees were also moving toward me.Before I knew what was happening,I was in chest-deep water encircled by not one or two,but at least three fatty bodies.I felt delighted and slightly dizzy like the kid who is 'it'in a schoolyard game. A big nose appeared next to me.In the clear water,I could clearly see the rest of the huge mammal,and there,nestled close behind her,a smaller version of her massive body. Paragraph 1: Then,with incredible gentleness for such an enormous creature,the larger manatee pushed its baby to the surface beside me. Paragraph 2: I was not sure what was happening,but it seemed that the manatees included me in their celebration of a birth. 情节安排主要的问题是：时间错综复杂+流水账无细节。 怎么解决这个问题呢？ 在写文章之前，我们首先要进行情节构思。 情节构思的第一步是