内容正文:
读后续写亲情类---妈妈的雨衣
原文表达积累
stick v. 刺,戳,插 stick out of the car windows
dismay n. 诧异;灰心丧气 He looked at her in dismay.
天色渐暗,开始下起毛毛雨。
我站在校门口,肩上背着重重的包。
当朋友们坐进父亲温暖舒服的车里,我和他们挥手再见。
奇怪的是,这引发了我内心一种烦恼的情绪。
我感觉脸发烫。
妈妈骑车过来,润滑不良的链条在车轮上嘎吱作响宣告着她的到来。
这是一个充满期待但又不安的时刻。
我强装欢笑,以半开玩笑的方式回答。
原文解读
· 角色__________:(性格)______________________
__________:(性格)______________________
角色关系 __________________________
· 情节线 Beginning Development Climax高潮 Ending
→ → →
· 情感线 _______________ → _______________ → _______________ → _______________
· 主题 __________________________
· 伏笔 __________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
续写构思
创作
Paragraph 1: Today she showed up in a raincoat.
· 情节倒推:
· 细节扩充(提问题)
1.___________________________________________ 回答_____________________________________________
2.___________________________________________ 回答_____________________________________________
3.___________________________________________ 回答_____________________________________________
3.___________________________________________ 回答_____________________________________________
Paragraph 2: Mom tried to cover me with the back of the raincoat again as a storm set in.
· 情节倒推:
· 细节扩充(提问题)
1.___________________________________________ 回答_____________________________________________
2.___________________________________________ 回答_____________________________________________
3.___________________________________________ 回答_____________________________________________
4.___________________________________________ 回答_____________________________________________
· 设四点
Paragraph 1: Today she showed up in a raincoat..____________________________________
________________________ ............
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Paragraph 2: Mom tried to cover me with the back o