内容正文:
2024届高三衡水金卷开学考英语应用文写作。
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Margaux写信向你询问如何平衡学习和摄影爱好之
间的关系。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.告知收到来信,得知情况。
2.给出合理建议。
谋局部篇:
L,(客套话)写信背景+写信目的(1.告知收到来信,得知情况)
L.主体(2.给出合理建议)
Ⅲ.结尾呼应+期待+祝福
建议信套词套句:
1.很高兴收到你的来信,征求我对…的建议。
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on.
2.你就…向我寻求建议,我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。
You have asked me for my advice with regard to...and Iwill try to make some
constructive suggestions
3.得知你.…,我写信给你提供些建议。
Knowing that..I'm writing to give you some suggestions.
4.我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful
必备词汇:
平衡:balance(.)keep the balance between.,and+(vt)balance.with
摄影:photography
分析:这是一封建议信,分成三个段落
第一段:说明写信背景:Margaux不知如何平衡学习和摄影爱好;
表明写信目的:提供合理建议
第二段:具体建议及带来的好处
可以采用终极目标来倒推建议
终极目标是:学习和摄影都不能耽误,换句话说,这两样都要投入时间,也就是
要做好时间管理。那就对如何做好时问管理再进行思考。
1.利用课堂时间保证学习效率及效果:课堂专注,课后作业效率就搞,更多的自
由时间就可以勇于摄影。
2.利用周未时间:不要把时间花在无效的社交活动上,而是用来参加与摄影有关
的活动上。
第三段:希望自己的建议有帮助作用,表达美好祝愿。
Dear Margaux,
In response to your letter informing me that you have trouble striking a balance
between your study and your hobby---photography,I'm writing to offer you some
practical suggestions.
With proper time management,you're bound to do well in both your study and
photography.First of all,it is advisable for you to stay focused in class,which will
increase your efficiency in completing your assignments.Thus,more free time can be
saved for your photography.Besides,on the weekends,you had better spend less time
on some meaningless social events or video games.Instead,if you can invite some
friends with the same interest to participate in the activities related to
photography,you will find your techniques for photography improved a great deal.
Hopefully,my tips above can be of great help and benefit to you.Wish you a
successful balance between your study and photography.
参考范文1:
Dear Margaux,
I heard that you love photography but have been struggling to balanceyour study
with pursuing your interests.I'm glad to offer my advice!
First of all,you'd better prioritize your time.Make a list of