2023年1月浙江首考读后续写题目--蜂鸟情缘讲义 -2024届高考英语作文复习专项

2023年1月8日浙江省高考真题 I was invited to a cookout on an old friend's farm in western Washington.I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years.A noise at a window caught my attention,so I entered it.It was a hummingbird ()desperately trying to escape.She was covered in spider-webs()and was barely able to move her wings.She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. 首段分析： 人物关系：单一主人公与拟人化动物之间的关系： 事件：开车去农场--路过废弃的milking house--看到被spider-webs困住的 hummingbird--营救。 感情要素：she的拟人，desperately trying to escape,barely able to,struggle.等 词证实作者对hummingbird的同情怜悯与博爱。 环境要素：无特别强调。 With the bird in my cupped hand,I looked around to see how she had gotten in.The broken window glass was the likely answer.I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside,closing the door securely behind me. 二段分析： I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside,closing the door securely behind me. 情感：喜爱。 When I opened my hand,the bird did not fly away;she sat looking at me with her bright eyes.I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings.Still,she made no attempt to fly.Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired?Or too thirsty? 三段分析： 事件：鸟在我手中，没有飞走，用她那明亮的眼球子看着我。-证实人与动 作的天然情感（让我想起儿时的美好回忆，与各种小动物的互动）你有吗？ 本段最后一句，作者的推断为续写埋下伏笔，推测小鸟当时的心理状况。 As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle,she began to move.I stopped,and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. 本段分析：承接前段，对情感和事件的强化。 Hovering(悬停)，she approached within six inches of my face,For a very long moment,this tiny creaturelooked into my eyes,turning her head from side to side.Then she flew quickly out of sight. 本段分析：小鸟飞走，主人公与小鸟情感确立。 During the cookout,I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window.As I was departing,my friends walked me to my car.I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began