七彩阳光返校联盟考读后续写讲评：Lost in the Smoky Mountain 讲义-2024届高三英语作文复习专项

01试题原题 第二节：读后续写（满分25分） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Nature,while beautiful,could also be unpredictable and merciless.But most importantly,we bear in mind that in the darkest times,there's always a light at the end of the tunnel,just like Mrs.Evans'cabin light. One bright summer day,my friend Peter and I decided to venture into the unexplored trails of the Great Smoky Mountains.Blessed with rich biodiversity and fascinating landscapes,the national park seemed a perfect getaway.Little did we know that our casual hike would soon turn into an unexpected personal incident,forever engraved in our memones. We set off early in the morning,equipped with our backpacks and a map that was supposed to guide us through the winding trails.The sun was up,casting long shadows on the forest floor as we set off on our joumey.We trekked(艰难行走)， laughed,and marveled at the beauty of nature around us. As we trekked through the dense forests,taking in the natural wonders around us,we couldn't help but feel a sense of adventure coursing through our veins.The trail was rugged and uneven,but we persevered through the challenging landscape. Midway through our expedition,we stumbled upon a breathtaking waterfall,its glistening waters cascading down the rocks in a quiet and peaceful melody.We sat down by the water's edge,taking a moment to get lost in the beauty of nature.The cool mist from the waterfall enveloped us,and we felt refreshed and energetic. As the day wore on,we ventured deeper into the wilderness,eager to explore every corner of this natural paradise.We were so absorbed in the beauty of nature that just didn't notice our way and it seemed that we could not find the way back to the familiar part of the forest. Panicking,we scrambled to find our way back but the dense vegetation and winding trails only served to confuse us further.We tried to remember any possible signs that might lead us back.No sooner had we celebrated our retur to the clear trails than something worse happened.