内容正文:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, the Chinese student takes summer courses in your university. I am writing to ask for help.
I come here last month and found my courses interested. And I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of what to use the library.
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I told that the Learning Center provides help for students and I am anxious to get help from you. I have no class in Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or call to me. Here is my email address and phone number: lihua@1236.com; 12345678.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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应用文写作(八)
求助信
Fantasy
丹寨民族高级中学 杨超
写信人就自己遇到的问题或困难向收信人寻求帮助时所写的信件(包括电子邮件),希望收信人就提出的问题提供帮助或给出针对性的解决方法。求助信要简明扼要,语气委婉、真诚。
Fantasy
审题
话题
体裁
时态
人称
要点
求助信
演讲比赛初稿修改
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第一人称
1. 问候、求助事由、表明目的
2. 列举遇到的问题(需要求助的事项)
3. 盼帮助、表感谢
列提纲
假定你是李华,假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算参加你校下周要举行的主题为"We Are All Dream Chasers"的英语演讲比赛,已经完成初稿。
根据以下提示用英语给你的外教Mr.White写一封邮件,请他帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1.指导内容;2.约定时间、地点。
写作流程
① 首段:
1. 问候、求助事由、表明目的
② 主体:
2.列举遇到的问题 1....
(需要求助的事项)2....
3....
③ 尾段:
盼帮助、表感谢
假定你是李华,假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算参加你校下周要举行的主题为"We Are All Dream Chasers"的英语演讲比赛,已经完成初稿。
根据以下提示用英语给你的外教Mr.White写一封邮件,请他帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1.指导内容;2.约定时间、地点。
完成初稿
修改、润色、纠正发音
他的办公室、周末
约地点、时间
下个星期我们学校将要举行一个主题为“We Are All Dream Chasers”的演讲比赛。
An English Speech Contest is to be held in our school next week, whose topic is "We Are All Dream Chasers".
我已经完成了我的初稿,如果您能帮我润色语言和纠正我的发音错误我将不胜感激。
I've decided to take part in it, so I am writing to ask you to do me a favor.
我决定参加这次比赛,因此向您寻求帮助。
I have finished my draft and I would be grateful if you could help me polish the language and correct my pronunciation mistakes.
如果您方便的话,我想和你在这个星期六下午三点您的办公室和您见面。
If it is convenient for you, I woul