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高考英语读后续写语篇练习
哲理故事——不要把我们所爱的人的爱视为理所当然
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王 均艳 (王) -
题目分析
读后续写
题目再现
范文呈现
努力方向
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Part 1
题目呈现
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续写原文
One day while 8-year-old Amy was walking home from school with her mom, she saw a wonderful barbie doll on the shelf of a toy shop. The barbie was designed and packed perfectly. She insisted on her mom buying it, but the family couldn't make ends meet and 50 dollars for the doll was too much to afford. All the savings had to be used to live their life.
Each day after school when coming back with her mom, Amy cried for that toy and all her mom could say was next month. Time passed with Amy crying for the barbie. Then her mom got Amy a “better” one as an alternative, obviously at a lower cost. She tried to persuade Amy to forget about that barbie. But Amy was very stubborn. She wanted that barbie only.
Two months later. her mom found a part-time job which she had to do at home in her spare time at night after making her daughter sleep. Finally she could have extra money. Now she was a bit relaxed. It was Monday morning, when like every school off, she went to bring her daughter. But this time she didn't go alone, she brought the barbie toy for Amy. Amy was glad to see the barbie. She hugged her mom in extreme joy.
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续写原文
Each day Amy played with her doll, giving the barbie a bath, combing her hair, and dressing her in fancy skirts, Days passed. Now she got one year older. But the barbie did not mean so much to her. While playing, she snatched her hair and broke one of her hands. After all, she got bored with it.
Years went by. Amy grew up. Then she got married and in her thirties. One day, she came to visit her old mom. After lunch she went to her room where she grew up. She was looking back on old times with her mom.
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段首句
Para 1:Suddenly Amy noticed her old toy box.
Para 2:She took the doll along with her and kept it on the shelf of her own house.
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Part 2
题目分析
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点1:位于续写第一段段首,流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语;
点2:位于续写第一段段尾,流畅衔接第二段段首句;
点3:位于续写第二段段首,续写衔接第二段段首语;
点4:文章结尾