Unit 1 单元话题满分范文必背-2023-2024学年九年级英语上册单元重难点易错题精练（仁爱科普版）

Unit 1 The Changing World

单元话题满分范文必背

一、材料作文

1．请根据下列内容提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈中国人口数量，以及政府在改善人们生活水平方面取得的成就。

内容提示：

1.中国有很大的人口，超过14亿人口。

2.中国做了巨大的努力来满足人们的日常需求。中国政府制定了很多合理的政策促进发展。中国变得越来越强大，人们生活水平正快速改善。

3.人们相信中国的未来会更加光明。

参考词汇：合理的政策 rational policies；工作机会 job opportunities；接受好的教育 get a good education

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【答案】例文

China is now developing faster and faster, and its population is also growing. China has a large population, more than 1.4 billion people.

China has made great efforts to meet people’s daily needs. The Chinese government has made many rational policies to promote development. It also provides more and more job opportunities for people because of the good education people get.

China is becoming stronger and stronger, and people’s living standards are improving rapidly. People believe that China’s future will be brighter.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”为主；

③提示：题干要求根据材料提示，谈谈中国人口数量，以及政府在改善人们生活水平方面取得的成就。

[写作步骤]

第一步，从总体上介绍中国的发展情况以及人口数量；

第二步，具体阐述政府在改善人们生活水平方面取得的成就；

第三步，总结全文，祝愿中国的未来会更好。

[亮点词汇]

①make great efforts to do努力做某事

②provide sth for sb为某人提供某物

③because of+名词（短语）因为

④faster and faster越来越快

[高分句型]

①The Chinese government has made many rational policies to promote development.(动词不定式作目的状语)

②It also provides more and more job opportunities for people because of the good education people get.(定语从句)

2．请根据提示写一篇题为“The Population Problem”的短文。80词左右。

提示： 1. 人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一；

2. 中国是世界上人口最多的国家；

3. 人口增长过快，将会带来许多严重的问题（请举例说明）。

The Population Problem

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【答案】例文

The Population Problem

It is reported that the world’s population is growing faster and faster. The population is one of the biggest problems in the world today. China has the largest population with more than 1.3 billion. It’s about one fifth of the

world’s population. The large population causes lots of problems. There is less living space for each family, and it is difficult for lots of people to find jobs. Most cities are more crowded than before, and the traffic is much heavier. Natural environments are becoming worse and worse. I think we should take measures to control the population growth.

【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一以及中国是人口最多的国家等，并介绍因人口增长带来的一些问题，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。

3．请根据提示写一篇题为The Population Problem的短文。（80词左右）

提示:

1.人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一；

2.中国是世界上人口最多的国家；

3.如果人口增长过快，将会带来许多严重问题（请举例说明）；

4.我们应继续执行计划生育政策，以控制人口增长。

The Population Problem

 

 

 

 

 

【答案】The Population Problem

The population is one of the biggest problems in the world today. China has the largest population with 1.3 billion. It has become a serious problem. A large population causes many difficulties, not only for every family, but also for the whole nation. For example, there is less living space. It’s difficult for many people to find jobs. We are short of energy and water. Most cities are more crowded than before, and the traffic is much heavier.

As far as I am concerned, we should do something to control the population. One answer is known as the one-child policy. It has worked well in controlling China’s population.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于材料作文，主要讲述当今世界上最大的问题——人口问题，并讲述人口过快增长的问题以及解决方法。注意时态的运用，并不能遗漏要点。

2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的文章，涉及到题目中所给的要点，第一段讲述人口问题、中国是世界上人口