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高考英语读后续写语篇练习
品德故事——搭载摩托车遇险,成功脱险
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王 均艳 (王) -
题目分析
读后续写
题目再现
范文呈现
努力方向
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Part 1
题目呈现
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续写原文
It was an unusually hot day. Exhausted after football practice, I headed for the bus stop to wait for Bus 112 which would take me home. I was beginning to drift off to sleep when I saw the bus arriving. The sun was in my eyes and that was probably the reason why I got onto Bus 113
I was glad to get a seat. Within minutes, I was sting against the window, fast asleep. When I opened my eyes, it was dark outside. I was the only passenger left on the bus. I could not recognize the part of town we were passing through. I pressed the bell and the bus stopped. I planned to hop across the road and catch a bus going the opposite direction. However, I found myself on a quiet street with a row of shops that were all closed. I kicked myself for not asking the driver for directions.
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续写原文
As I was wondering what to do, a motorcycle came down the road. The rider looked at me as he passed and then stopped a short distance away. I went to him and asked him how to get back to the City Square. He smiled and nodded. He patted the back seat and said that he would send me home. Without a second thought, I climbed up behind the rider. He turned the motorcycle around and headed in the direction I wanted. We travelled for about 15 minutes and the surroundings still looked unfamiliar to me. The rider made a few turns and I knew I was hopelessly lost. I asked him where we were going, He did not answer but increased his speed. Alarm bells started to ring in my head.
I tapped the man, shoulder and told him to stop. He leaned forward and went at high speed now. Then he slowed down to turn into a dark and narrow road that led into an oil palm plantation. I had had enough.
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段首句
Para 1:I jumped off the vehicle and fell onto the ground.
Para 2:I got off the taxi and rushed into my house.
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Part 2
题目分析
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点1:位于续写第一段段首,流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语;
点2:位于续写第一段段尾,流畅衔接第二段段首句;
点3:位于续写第二段段首,续写衔接第二段段首语;
点4:文章结尾升华