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Missy was absolutely my best friend in the whole world.We had known each
other since first grade,and we literally did everything together.We frequently
visited each other's homes,we knew each other's families like they were our
own.The interesting thing about our relationship,however the fact was that the
older we got,the more our values seemed to differ.We still enjoyed a lot of the
same things,but I was a bit more settled while she loved being associated with
popular people and things.Although she was basically a good person,she had no
problem with forcing things to go her way.
(这里是表示关系很好,为下文的我帮她隐瞒真相做铺垫,同时指出两
人的价值观不同,续写中可以着重表达自己内心的挣扎与羞愧)
Perhaps this is why it seemed that her family actually trusted me more than
they trusted her..(这里说明信任,那续写中要体现她父亲对我的信任以
及失望再到信任破裂的过程)So,on the day when Missy showed up at my
house with a huge dent()in her father's car,I knew that we were in for a
troublesome time.(通过这些可以分析人物性格,Missy可以直接说出编
造的故事,而我应当保持沉默并且内心是很想说出真相的)文章前两段
可以分析出人物性格,只要把握人物性格,续写中的心理描写就很好揣
摩了!
She had banged the car into a tree while out that day,and she knew her father
was going to have an explanation.So she stopped by my house in order to make
up a story that would lessen her father's rage.Missy decided to tell him that while
in a parking lot,someone must have backed into the car and dented it.Looking at
the dent with some crashed leaves and bark still sticking there,(这里的在下文
可以直接用,作为父亲发现撒谎的证据)I attempted to perish(打消)her
thought,(好词好句一定要记下来)Idon't think your father will buy it.”
"Don't worry,"she insisted,"even if my dad doesn't trust me,he'll trust you."My
role was to confirm for her..Now keep in mind(句型在文章中合理运用也会
that I had strong objections to lying and I wanted absolutely nothing to
do with the situation.I loved her parents just like my own,and I did not want to be
a party(下文中如果帮凶不会可以直接用这个词代替)to this lie that Missy
was creating.Nevertheless,after much request and a general questioning of my
loyalty to our friendship,I decided that the least I could do w