Unit 1 Cultural Heritage(强化高分训练)-【志鸿优化训练】2023-2024学年新教材高中英语必修第二册(人教版2019)

高分写作冲关练 高分写作冲关练 写新闻报道 They said it was such a beautiful day that 5月1日，高二(3)班学生去阳光敬老院开 they would never forget it forever. 展志愿者活动。假定你叫李华，是校英语报的 他们说这是多么美好的一天，他们永远 记者。请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容 铭记。 包括： Apart from knowledge,we also learned to 1.时间与地点。 cooperate with each other and came to realise 2.活动的过程。 the importance of team work. 3.对于此次活动的评价。 除了知识，我们也学会了和他人合作，也 注意：1.词数80左右： 逐渐意识到合作的重要性。 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 If there is any change,we will keep you informed ahead of time. 如有变动，我们会提前通知您。 It is important for us to solve the problem. 【审题立意】 对我们来说解决这个问题非常重要。 新闻报道是记叙文的一种，其特点是以事 The activity benefits us a lot. 实为依据，对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实 这项活动令我们受益匪浅。 事求是的报道。写作过程中要保证事件的真 The activity was of great benefit to us. 实性、准确性、及时性。语言要准确、简练、通 这项活动对我们很有好处。 俗易懂。 【范文示例】 【写作思路】 On May 1,students from Class 3,Grade 本题是写一篇新闻报道，报道学校举行的 2 went to the Sunshine Nursing Home and did 一次志愿者活动。 some voluntary work. 新闻报道要求报道要及时，具有时效性。 Warmly welcomed by the elderly for their 写作过程中，要点明新闻发生的时间、地点及 arrival,they hugged each other in such 人物：发生了哪些重要的事情：学生从中学到 friendly atmosphere.Then they were busy 了什么。 working.Some students were cleaning the 【常用句式】 floor,rooms and windows.The others were What they did has brought joy to others presenting the elderly with flowers and fruits, and enriched their own lives. playing jokes and telling stories. 他们所做的给他人带来欢乐，而且丰富了 What they did has brought joy to others 他们自己的生活。 and enriched their own lives.They said that it ·英语 15 UNIT 1 CULTURAL HERITAGE was such a beautiful day that they would 2.灵活使用非谓语动词：Warmly welcomed by never forget it forever.In addition,they (过去分词作状语)：playing jokes and learned to cooperate with each other and came telling stories(现在分词作状语)：They also to realise the importance of team work. learned to cooperate with each other.(不定 Time for leaving,the elderly people 式作宾语)等。 thanked the volunteers for the joy they 3.恰当使用衔接词：some.others:then;in brought.In a word,the loving activity means a addition;in a word等。 lot and benefits us a lot. 【迁移训练】 【亮点点评】 你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。 L.正确