2023届高考英语写作提升指导课件

写作教学反思 之 写作提升指导 LOGO 1班一月份月考作文分析 得分 25 24 23 22 21 人数0 2 5 11 5 平均分：19.5 写作难点调查 所占比例(%)（多选） 审题不准确、偏题 12% 不会使用高级句型 42% 话题相关词汇不会拼写 30% 其他 高考作文评分标准 第五档（很好）；（21-25分) 1.完全完成试题规定的任务。 2.覆盖所有内容要点 3.1 应用了较多的法结构和饲汇。 4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为 尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致； 具备较强的语言运用能力。 5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全 文结构紧凑。 6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。 ※写作提升 一、词汇升级 1.词组优先 D Suddenly I had a good idea. Suddenly I came up with a good idea. ② Your efforts will be very important. Your efforts will be of great importance. Your efforts will make a great difference. 2.避免重复 DI like reading while my brother likes watching television. I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television. 2 I think doing sports is beneficial to our health...I also think that what we eat matters. I thinkI believe/I am convinced that 3.免落俗套 It is difficult to do sth challenging/tough freezing It is cold outside charming/attrac tive She is a beautiful girl- huge/giant There is a big sculpture in the park→ 二、句子结构升级 写作常用句子结构 1.从句（定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句） I heard that he would come and I was excited. -The news that he would come made me -What made eeceegited was to hear that he 2.倒装句(only/否定磁d句道me. We can make great progress in this way.Only in this way can we make great 3强调句rogress. We can make great progress in this wayt is in this way that we can make great 4.非谓语结物ess. I heard that he would come and I was excited. Hearing that he would come,I was excited. 5.双重否定 We made great progress with his help. -We couldn't have made great progress without his help Ex 1.Polish the sentences 1.I will remember his words forever. I will never forget what he said. Never will I forget what he said. It is what he said that I will never forget. 2.We can protect the environment in this way. Only in this way can we protect the environment. It is in this way that we can protect the environment 3.Tu Yoyo is a famous scientist.She won The Nobel Prize in Medicine in 2015. Tu Yoyo,a famous scientist,won The Nobel Prize in Medicine in 2015. Tu Yoyo,who is a famous scientist, w