内容正文:
读后续写
-2020年浙江卷
一. 读
who
when
where
what
how
why
二. 思
conflicts
solutions
We wanted to ___________ polar bears, but we encountered an hungry and angry one. We ___________ the bear
photograph
drove away
The bear __________, and we escaped from the_______. We also ________the bear
came back
danger
photographed
1.猜结尾
二. 思
两段段首定一框
二框二首正能量
2.构框架
二. 思
2.构框架
Para1:
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp_____________________________
Para2:
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.____________________________________
Group work
两段段首定一框
二框二首正能量
Presentation!
三. 写
1.所闻:语言描写
2.所思:心理描写
3.所做:动作描写
4.所见:环境描写
rewrite your paragraph
三. 写
1.所闻:语言描写
2.所思:心理描写
3.所做:动作描写
4.所见:环境描写
voice+facial expression+body language+thoughts
adj1+adj2,sb do sth,doing sth.
adj+as sb +be动词,sb do sth
sb was so +adj+that从句
v1,v2 and v3
s+v+(o),doing and doing
Doing.s+v+(o),doing
adj,s+v+(o)
四. 评(one possible version)
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. The pepper spray hadn’t scared him away! The bear crashed both of his giant paws against the fence. I was terrified. Then EIli had a genius idea.“He likes the smell of the bread. So, let’s give it to him!”she said. She ran over and
grabbed the garlic bread. The smell of the food was enchanting. EIli threw the bread right over the fence. It landed in front of the bear. The bear ate the dough in one gulp. Snap! I took a picture.
四. 评(one possible version)
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. The loud sound of the spinning wings chased the terrified bear away. The wind whipped my hair into my eyes as the helicopter landed.“We could stay now," Elli said. I was so scared that my stomach hurt. I checked my camera roll, and my face transformed into a huge smile.“ No,”I told her.“Let' s pack up camp. We already have a lot of amazing pictures."
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