内容正文:
Module2一个难忘的节日
Guided Writing
写作任务(Unit2 Writing)
假如你是胡娜,你的美国笔友Ali©e发来电子邮件询问你曾度过的一个难忘的节
日。请你根据以下提示给她回复邮件,向她介绍这一令你难忘的节日。
提示内容:
1.令你难忘的节日是什么:
2.你是如何度过这一节日的:
3.这个节日令你难忘的原因。
思路
1.基调
体裁:应用文(邮件):邮件的主体部分为记叙文
时态:以一般过去时为主
人称:以第一人称为主
2.布局
难忘的节日
引出节日
Dear Alice,
I'm glad to tell you about an unforgettable festival I have enjoyed.As for me,the
last Mid-Autumn Festival was unforgettable.
节日经历
It was the first time that I celebrated the festival with my foreign friend Tony at my
home.
(1)
(我和Toy从妈妈那里学会了如何做月饼).
(2)
(我们做了不同形状的月饼)
(3)
(我们一吃完午饭就一起玩了游戏),
(4)
(我们吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐)。
It was very delicious.
We ate the moon cakes while we were enjoying the full moon ()
(5)
(我还给Tony讲了嫦娥的故事)
难忘的原因
I will never forget the last Mid-Autumn Festival.I got together with my family and my
foreign friend.Everyone had great fun.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Hu Na
3.衔接
在介绍节日经历时,可以用表示时间顺序的词语来衔接上下文,如:on the
moming of that day,.at about six,after that等,这些词语的使用可以将节日经历描述
得连贯、自然,从而使文章成为一个有机统一体。
4.成文章
Dear Alice,
I'm glad to tell you about an unforgettable festival I have enjoyed.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Hu Na
答案
Guided Writing
2.布局
(1)Tony and I leamed how to make moon cakes from my mother
(2)We made moon cakes of different shapes
(3)As soon as we finished our lunch,we played games together /We played games
together as
soon as we finished our lunch
(4)We had a big dinner
(5)I also told Tony the story of Chang'e
4.成文章
Dear Alice.
I'm glad to tell you about an unforgettable festival I have enjoyed.As for
me,the last Mid-Autumn Festival was unforgettable.
It was the first time that I celebrated the festival with my foreign friend Tony at my
home.On the morning of that day,Tony and I learned how to make moon cakes from
my mother.We made moon cakes of different shapes.As soon as we finished our
lunch,we played games together.At about six,we had a big dinner.It was very
delicious.After that,we ate the moon cakes while we were enjoying the full moon.I
also told Tony the story of Chang'e.
I will never forget the last Mid-Autumn Festiv