Unit 3 单元写作 导学案 2023-2024学年高一英语人教版（2019）必修第一册

必修一Unit3 如何用英语写对比类文章 写作任务 假定你是李华，你校将举办主题为Me before and after sports'"的英语沙龙，你有意参加， 请你结合自身经历准各一份英语发言稿。 注意：词数120左右（开头和结尾己给出，但不计入总词数） Good momning,everyone!It is my honor to be here to talk about me before and after sports. Thank you! 写作指导 一、审题定调 本写作任务要求用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍运动前后的自己，属于对比类文章。主题语 境为人与自我，倡导健康的生活方式、积极的生活态度。人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般 现在时、现在完成时和一般过去时为主。 二、拟定提纲 本写作可分为以下三部分： 第一部分：总体介绍运动给自己带米的变化： 第二部分：对比运动前后的自己： 第三部分：自己的感想。 三、搜集素材 单词： stressful,physically,cheerful,positive, 短语： gain a lot from,have a strong influence on,prefer to,rather than,feel low.make up my mind, build my body,make some changes.lift/raise my spirits,maintain a positive attitude,... 句子： I've gained a lot from sports. I got too much pressure from courses. *I felt too low to communicate with people. ★I decided to play ★It has changed me a lot. 衔接词： ★表因果关系： because,as,so,thus,therefore,as a result,... ★表时间顺序： first of all,firstly,then,secondly,finally,in the end,at last,.. ★表递进关系： what's more,to make matters worse,besides,moreover,furthermore,in addition,.. ★表转折关系： but,yet,however,on the contrary,.. 四、撰写草稿 按照列出的提纲，使用搜集的素材扩展每个部分，完成初稿。 第一部分：总体介绍运动给自己带来的变化。 I've gained a lot from sports and badminton has had a strong influence on me. 第二部分：对比运动前后的自己。 When I first entered high school,I got too much pressure from courses.I didn't want to go out of my room to take part in sports.I hated to communicate with people.I decided to make some changes.I decided to play badminton.It has cheered me a lot. 第三部分：自己的感想。 I build up my body through badminton.I maintain a positive attitude towards life. 五、修改润色 初稿完成后，为了使文章表达准确、逻辑清楚，需对初稿进行修改润色。如： 使用复合句，用“介词+which"引导定语从句代替and连接的并列句，如I've gained a lot from sports,among which badminton has had a strong influence on me. 增加衔接词使上下文更加连贯，如to make matters worse、then、all in all等。 使用句型，如so...that,使句子逻辑更加紧密。 适当添加细节，充实内容，使文章更有说服力，如I have lost five kilograms and made a lot of good friends等。 六、检查定稿 经过修改润色之后，需要再读一遍，以便发现并改正拼写、标点符号和语法上的错误， 最后定稿，完成写作。 范文欣赏 Good morning,everyone!It is my honor to be here to t