内容正文:
必修一Unit1
如何用英语写建议信
写作任务
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友最近刚升入高中,她给你发来一封邮件说自己因为考试失利而产生了
大的挫败感。希望得到你的帮助。请给她回一封邮件,内容包括:
1表示理解:
2.提出合理建议:
3.希望所提建议有所帮助。
注意:1.词数120左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数):2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Ella.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作指导
一、审题定调
本写作任务要求写一封建议信,属干应用文。建议信的目的是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或看法。内容包括写
的原因、建议的内容、提出这种建议的理由等。建议信要简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
由干本写作是私人信件,故措辞方面不必太过拘礼。
二、谋篇布局
建议信的格式和普通信件一样因本写作任务的开头和结尾已给出,所以我们只需写出
正文部分即可。
建议信的正文部分可分为三部分:
第一部分:引出话题,说明写信目的:
第二部分:提出合理的建议及理由:
第三部分:希望所提建议有所帮助。
三、组织语言
第一部分:引出话题,说明写信目的。
I'm happy to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble in you find it hard to...
Learning that you have trouble in....I'm writing to provide you with some advice.
You have asked for my advice about ..and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
I understand how you are feeling now and I'd like to offer you some advice.
I am writing to express my views concerning ..
Here are some tips advice suggestions.
Such problems are quite normal.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
第二部分:提出合理的建议及理由。
If I were you,I would...
In my personal view/In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following action(s).
I think it would be more beneficial if you could...
It seems to me that you could...
When it comes to such a situation,I would like to suggest that you should ..
I strongly recommend that you ..
It is wise of you to...
第三部分:希望所提建议有所帮助。
I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful helpful.
I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.
范文佳作
Dear Ella,
I'm sorry to hear that you failed the exam.Don't worry too much about the result.Perhaps the
following suggestions
may help you get over it and move forward.
Firstly,I think it would be beneficial if you could review your test paper.We all make
mistakes but learning how
to stop making the same mistakes counts.Secondly,it would be wise to adjust your learning
strategies.The most suitable
ones for you are the best.More