建议信写作技巧探讨课件-2024届高考英语复习

高三应用文写作专练 建议信的写作 建议信写作目的： 要求对有关问题进行分析并提出自己的看法和建议。 其写作框架流程为： 开头(beginning)--开门见山，向对方展示你的理解，明确陈 述自己的观点。 主体(body)-对问题进行分析，接着提供几条建议来帮助解决 这个问题。 结尾(ending)--结尾一定是坑底的信息，让收信人看到后能 够振作起来，树立信心。 素材积累： 一、常用词汇 upset; confused; schedule; confidence; overcome;feel lonely; turn to sb for help; put one's heart into give sb some advice tips suggestions on have difficulty trouble doing sth; 二、常用句型 精彩开头： 1.I know you are now having trouble .. 2.I'm glad to receive your letter asking for .. 3.Here are some tips to help you. Here are some suggestions for you. 4.I think you can make it if you follow the advice below. .主体常用语： 1.Firstly,why not join a club?If you do this,you can make friends. 2.Secondly,you should can try to talk with others.Then That way you can feel better. 3.Thirdly,it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music.By doing this,you will calm yourself down. 4.Last but not least,you should talk with her first. 常用结束语 1.I hope you will find these ideas useful. 2.As time goes on,people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above advice. 3.I hope my advice will be of help to you. 建议信 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack刚刚升入高中，他有时感到困惑和沮 丧，无法很快适应新的校园生活，写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回 一封建议信，内容主要包括： 1.很多新生对于高中生活感到困惑，不必过多担心。 2.具体建议：参加一些学校俱乐部， 结交更多的新朋友；制作一份学习计 划，把注意力集中在学习上，作为一名青少年，好好读书是我们的责 任。 3.希望建议对你有帮助。 注意： 1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, I'm sorry to hear that you're having trouble adjusting to your high school life.. Yours, Li Hua 一、审题谋篇 体裁：应用文 主题： 就高一新生的苦恼与求助给朋友的建议 人称： 一、二为主 时态：一般现在时为主 谋篇：段一委婉进行安慰，说明你对对方的理解，点明 写作目的： 段二根据所给提示，帮助分析问题，给出具体建 议； 段三希望建议能够对朋友有所帮助。 二、要点翻译： 1. many freshmen so don't worry about it too much. 2.I some school clubs make more new friends. 3. your school life will become colorful and interesting. 4.You should make a good study schedule and it. 5.As a teenager, is also our duty. 6.I hope my advice 三、词句升级： 1.用短语改写句1； 2.用定语从句改写句2 3.将句5改写成含有t作形式主语的句子。 4.用介词短语替换句6中的helpful.