2023年高考全国1卷和全国乙卷英语应用文写作思路解析讲义-2024届高三英语作文专项复习

全国1卷应用文解析 假定你是李华，外教Ryn准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习 口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.说明问题； 2.提出建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右： 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I'm Li Hua from Class 3.I am writing to express my suggestions on your study group division. Intended to ensure a better chance for practicing students'oral English, you divide us randomly into pairs,which I think is not appropriate in two ways.First of all,it may lead to unbalanced language abilities,thus hindering the practicing pace.Second,students may not cooperate well with another one assigned out of unfamiliarity. Based on what I have stated,a better way would be to match us according to our language proficiency,making everyone fully involved in the activity,or allow us to pair groups by ourselves.Either way can not only improve students'enthusiasm but also contribute to better productivity. Above are my suggestions.Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 我是3班的李华。我写信是想表达我对学习小组划分的建议。 为了保证学生有更好的机会练习英语口语，你把我们随机分成两组，我认 为这在两个方面都不合适。首先，它可能导致语言能力不平衡，从而阻碍顺 利的练习节奏。其次，由于不熟悉，学生可能无法很好地配合另一位完成任 务。 根据我所说的，更好的方法是根据我们的语言水平进行配对，让每个人都 充分参与到活动中来，或者让我们自己结对。无论哪种方式都不仅可以提 高学生的积极性，而且有助于提高学习效率。 以上是我的建议。谢谢您的考虑 【写作思路】 结构构思： 该文章是建议信，学生在审题时要很快定位到建议信的功能词块，如 sb.suggest doing sth It is advised that sb.should.... I suggest that sb.should..... I think it is important to...... It is highly recommended that.... 文章开头段要写写作目的是什么。中间两端分别写问题和建议，12条都 可以，但是要注意，必要的时候，要学会扩展内容。 2.词块激活 学习小组分组：study group division 随机两人一组：divide us randomly into pairs 目的是，打算做..be intended to do 不平衡的语言能力：unbalanced language abilities 阻碍练习节奏：hinder the practicing pace 由于不熟悉：out of unfamiliarity 根据我们的语言水平进行配对：match us according to our language proficiency 有助于提高学习效率：contribute to better productivity 3.高分句型 Intended to ensure a better chance for practicing students'oral English,you divide us randomly into pairs,which I think is not appropriate in two ways. (分词作状语+主句+非限制性定语从句) it may lead to unbalanced language abilities,thus hindering the practicing pace.(逗号后面为状语从句的省略) Se