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. (②展示学习新技能过程中遇到的挫折,以及自己是如何应对,为后文主题不放弃做铺垫) ③It is amazing that after a few weeks, I write better, I could even write some impressive lines all by myself. ④It was not until then that I started to write short articles.⑤surprisingly,I got my own fans and followers, which is a great encouragement to me , like a miracle.⑥Imagine how happy I was. ⑦Time permitting, I would write a few lines each day to help others. (③不断努力就会见到成效,给点正能量 ④加一个not until结构的强调句型,丰富句式 ⑤副词修饰整个句子,语法填空题中经常考的一个结构 ⑥感叹句,抒发一下情感 ⑦独立主格结构,来撑个场面) From my writing experience, I learned that nobody is born perfect.⑧ When in trouble,we should try to ask for help and keep on trying.⑨Anyway, God helps those who help themselves.⑩Only if one never gave up, could he achieve success in the end. (⑧用个省略,这个结构只要学生听过When in Rome, do as the Romans do就能写出来