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书面表达如何增加细节
因全国卷书面表达题的要点很简洁,没有非常
具体的内容,需要考生适当增加细节。如何增加细
节?增加细节有三个原则:围绕主题,文体常识
生活经验。具体来说,可增加以下六项内容:
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1.增加开头过渡衔接句和结尾句
包括开头、过渡句、湘关背景、结尾等。
全国卷的书面表达多为书信或邮件,虽然开头
和结束语常己给出,但大多并非可以直接写正
文,因为还可能缺少过渡。
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(2019年全国I卷)得知当地美术馆要举办中国画
展览,申请做志愿者。
开头过渡:I'm a visiting student at a British school
in your city for a two-month stay.I'm writing to ask
if I could work in your art gallery as a volunteer.
结尾:I am looking forward to hearing from you.
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2.增加原因或理由
(2022年全国甲卷)要点(2)保护海洋的倡议。
But sea waters are polluted and many sea animals are
faced with the survival challenge.As the main beneficiaries
of oceans,we should give a healthy ocean back to them.We
love the oceans,we use the oceans,and now,it's time for us
to do our bit to protect the oceans.
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3.增加结果
(2011年全国Ⅱ卷)赞赏该报优点:
①兼顾国内外新闻;②介绍名人成功故事
First,it covers both national and international news
so that,by simply turning the pages,I can learn all
important things that have happened during the week.
Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous
people,which help me understand how a person can
work hard to make the world a better place.
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4.增加目的
(2017年全国I卷)要点(3)课前准备:简要了解唐
朝的历史。
To make it easier,I suggest you study and get some
knowledge of the Tang Dynasty in advance.
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5.增加举例
2021年全国甲卷)向外国朋友Cris了解哪些中国传统
文化更吸引外国友人。
Among topics as Chinese food,painting,architecture,
medicine or Beijing Opera,what you think would
interest people from your country?
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6.增加文化背景
(2015全国Ⅱ卷)邀请外教Lucy去敬老院陪老人过重阳节。
I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby
nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth
Festival.It is the day for the elderly in our culture.
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THANK YOU!
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