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如何做到行文连贯
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行文是否连贯是作文评分的一条重要依据。如何做
到行文连贯呢?
1.梳理要点,合理排列
将所有要点进行梳理,进行合理布局,使各要点之
间本身具有逻辑关系,层次分明,衔接紧密。从文章布
局的层面上看,一般说来,我们要按题目给定的要点顺
序来写。
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2.增加细节,前后衔接
围绕主题,根据经验常识,合理增加细
节,充实内容,使前后连贯。
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3.有效使用关联词语
表示转折的however、but;表示递进或补充的
besides、what's more、what's worse、furthermore、
in addition to等;表示列举的for one thing..for another、
firstly..secondly..last but not least等;¥例用such as、
for example、like等;表示总结的in short、in conclusion、
in a wordi等。
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请写以下作文,注意关联词的使用。
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Bob被选中代表
他们学校参加在长沙举办的汉语桥,他不知道如何
准备,向你征求建议,请你给他写封回信,给出你
的建议并表达美好祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Bob,
I'm more than glad to hear that
Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Bob,
I'm more than glad to hear that you were chosen to
represent your school to participate in the Chinese
Bridge to be held in Changsha on Nov.15.I'm writing to
share with you my suggestions on how to prepare for it.
Above all,you'd better spend more time strengthening
your ability to use Chinese,which is the most important
quality to win.
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What's more,it could be a good idea for you to surf the
Internet for general introduction on China.Only by doing
so can you gain as much basic information about China as
possible within such a short time.Lastly,you're supposed to
sign up for programs to acquire some cultural skills such as
paper cutting,singing songs and so on.
I do hope these tips can be helpful to you.Good luck with
your competition.
Yours,
Li Hua
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THANK YOU!
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