考点16 英语作文中句式的升级-【全优新高考】2024年新高考英语一轮总复习培优全攻略（上海专用）

考点16 英语作文中句式的升级 课前热身练 （2023春·上海·华师大二附中校考阶段练习）在社交网络日渐流行的今天，高中生使用QQ、微信、B站等平台的频率日渐增多。网络平台给同学们提供学习资源的同时，也带来了虚假新闻、滥用言论自由等问题。请就这一社会现象发表看法，内容包括： 1. 简述目前网络平台的一些问题； 2. 提出你对改善网络环境的建议及理由。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Nowadays, the use of social media platforms such as QQ, WeChat and Bilibili by high school students is increasing rapidly. However, these participations bring up several problems, such as the proliferation of fake news, the abuse of freedom of speech, and so on. To improve the online environment, I suggest that school should promote an education programme for the students, which emphasizes the importance of the accuracy of information and be aware of inappropriate words or works on the Internet. Besides, students should also take the initiative to build a healthy online environment by avoiding fake news, disrespectful words or trolling. Last but not least, teenagers should limit and balance the use of the Internet. Abusive and inappropriate behaviors from social media can be largely avoided if more time is put into outdoor activities and productive works. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。在社交网络日渐流行的今天，高中生使用QQ、微信、B站等平台的频率日渐增多。网络平台给同学们提供学习资源的同时，也带来了虚假新闻、滥用言论自由等问题。要求考生请就这一社会现象发表看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 迅速地：rapidly → quickly 引起：bring up → cause/bring about 建议：suggest → advise/propose 此外：besides → in addition 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合 原句：However, these participations bring up several problems, such as the proliferation of fake news, the abuse of freedom of speech, and so on. 拓展句：However, these participations bring up several problems, which include the proliferation of fake news and the abuse of