Unit 4 Section Ⅴ Writing——写一篇关于旅行的经历-【金版新学案】2023-2024学年新教材高二英语选择性必修第二册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（人教版）

Section Ⅴ　Writing UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 写一篇关于旅行的经历 　　本单元要求以Li Daiyu的口吻写一封家信(电子邮件)给父母，属于应用文类别，但是内容是记叙旅行经历，即游记。游记文体写作主要包括以下三个方面：1.游记基本内容：人物，时间，地点，景色和活动，感受等。2.游记要以时间为主要线索。一般按照时间先后顺序记叙旅行经过，需要掌握一些时间表达法。3.多使用描写性语言，特别是对景色和心理感受的描绘。描写词句有很强的画面感和感染力，使语言更加生动形象。 增分佳句 1.游记开始常用句式结构。 (1)I’d like to share one of the most fascinating experiences with you. (2)I’m glad to share a truly unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you. (3)Last week/month/year，I paid a visit to...，which is famous for... (4)It lies/is located/situated in... 2.游记过程表达时间顺序的句式结构。 (1)during the first day (2)the next day (3)after another day on the train (4)night came again (5)when they woke up the next morning (6)after Li Daiyu and her cousin arrived in Toronto 3.游记描写景色和心理感受的句式结构。 (1)The scenery is so beautiful that it takes the tourists’ breath away. (2)Wherever you go，there are plenty of activities to choose from. (3)It has become one of the most popular tourist attractions in the world. (4)We were all tired，but our trip was really unforgettable. 典题示例 写作要求 　　假定你是Li Daiyu，根据本单元介绍的旅行过程，给你的父母写封电子邮件，介绍你这次加拿大之行。 要求：(1)符合游记文体特征；(2)适当增加连接词。 四步成文 第一步：审题谋篇 体裁话题 应用文；记叙加拿大火车旅行 时态人称 一般过去时为主；第一人称为主 布局架构 首段：邮件开头套语并点明主要内容 中段：重点介绍旅行见闻 尾段：表达想法，深化主题 第二步：完成句子 1.我们是从温哥华出发的。到温哥华的第一天就下雨了。 We started in Vancouver. It rained _______________ we arrived in Vancouver. 2.几天后我们乘火车去了路易斯湖，然后乘长途汽车去了贾斯珀，一路上看了美景和各种野生动物。 A few days later we took a train to Lake Louise __________ a coach to Jasper. We _______________________ and various wild animals ____________． 3.我们惊讶于加拿大大平原是如此空旷和广阔，农场一望无际。 We are amazed by how ________________ the Canadian Prairie was. The farms stretched on _______________________ . the first day and then saw beautiful scenery on the way empty and wide as far as the eye could see 4.我们从多伦多去了蒙特利尔。我们在那里遇到一个摄影师，他讲了这个城市很多文化特色。 From Toronto we went to Montreal. There we met a photographer. He ________ _______________________. 5.这是一次很棒的旅行。这次旅行让我们心中充满了快乐的记忆。 It has been a gr