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Section Ⅴ　Writing UNIT 1　SCIENCE AND SCIENTISTS 写一篇关于伟大科学家必备素养的文章 　　描写伟大科学家必备素养，属于人物传记语篇，内容包括介绍科学家的优秀品质，以及著名科学家的生平、成就以及献身科学的精神。写作时应遵循如下思路线索：1.选取典型事件，突出人物的个性和品质。介绍科学家时，应有相应的事例作为支撑，即所谓“借事记人”。2.选用语篇衔接词语，使得文章连贯顺畅。衔接词语是语篇的连接纽带，人物传记的衔接包括时间关系、空间关系、列举和顺序、例证、递进、转折对比、等同和替换、过渡和总结、结果和推论等。3.理顺人物传记语篇结构。此类文体常用结构包括：(1)人物简介；(2)典型事件；(3)主要成就；(4)个性品质。4.写作过程中要注意人称的变化和时态的运用。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹等常用一般过去时。5.恰当使用总结性语言，对人物的优秀品质进行点睛式的概括，进一步升华主题。 1．人物基本介绍 ①Majoring in medical science, he graduated from Sun Yat-Sen University with a bachelor’s degree in 1989 and four years later, he went abroad for further studies. ②Born in Ningbo City, Zhejiang Province in December 1930, Tu Youyou showed a strong interest in medicine while she was young. ③She was born in Barbados but spent her formative years growing up in Miami. ④He accumulated wide knowledge in his teens. ⑤She made up her mind to study hard and dreamt of becoming a scientist. 增分佳句 2．人物主要事迹、成就介绍 ①During all her life, she worked very hard and discovered the element radium. She received the Nobel Prizes in 1903 and in 1911. ②He had a gift for writing and made up his mind to become a writer when he grew up. ③They threw themselves heart and soul into the project. ④Yuan Longping, known as “the Father of Hybrid Rice”，has devoted himself into researching on this area. ⑤She set an example for others to follow. 3．总结人物的影响、精神及人们的评价 ①He is a good doctor in the countrymen’s eyes and respected by all the people in China. ②He is an outstanding man, whose courage, talent and humour inspire the people all over the world. ③His life experience is inspiring young people to achieve their dreams. ④Today she is remembered not only as a great scientist, but also for her determination and courage. ⑤What he had done was thought highly of on all sides. 写作要求 　　假定你是李华，收到好友John的邮件，John希望自己将来能成为一名像袁隆平一样伟大的科学家并希望多了解一些袁隆平博士的情况。请你给他回一封电子邮件介绍袁隆平博士。要点如下： (1)对John的梦想表示支持； (2)介绍科学家袁隆平及其具备的品质。 注意：(1)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (2)词数80左右。 典题示例 四步成文 第一步：审题谋篇 体裁话题 应用文；如何成为