读后续写亲情类--一碗面条讲义-2024届高考英语作文复习专项

一、阅读材料 A bowl of noodles Jenny was the only child in her home.She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily.She couldn't help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scolding from her mother.Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours,she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat,but it was not even possible for her,since she had nothing with her.She stood beside a stand for a while,watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business.However,with no money in hand,she sighed and had to leave. The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked,"Hey.girl,you want to have the noodles?” "Oh,yes...but I don'thave money on me.."she replied. “That's nothing.I'll treat you today,”said the man,“come in.”The seller brought her a bowl of noodles,whose smell was so attractive.As she was eating,Jenny cried silently. “What is it?”asked the man kindly "Nothing.actually I was just touched by your kindness!"said Jenny as she wiped her tears. "Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles,while my mother.drove me out of the house.She showed no care for me.She is so merciless compared to a stranger!!" Hearing the words.the seller smiled."Girl,do you really think so?I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot.But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby.Can you number the times she cooked for you?Have you expressed your gratitude to her?” Jenny sat there,speechless and numb with shock.she remembered mother's familiar face and weathered hands."Why did I not think of that?A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel indebted,but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me. On the way home,Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home. Para 1.Nearing the doorway.Jenny took a deep breath.. Para 2.A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back... 二、文本分析 本文是“人与社会”主题范畴下“人际交往”子主思，全文9段353字：讲述Jeny 和母亲吵架后离