内容正文:
Writing on environmental issues
导学案
一、2022年全国甲卷书面表达
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.海洋的重要性;
2.保护海洋的倡议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Our Oceans, Our Responsibility
June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day. ___________
审题:
写作类型
应用文 — 短文投稿
写作时态
一般现在时
介绍海洋的重要性
一般将来时
表达期待
写作人称
以第一人称和第三人称为主
写作语言
语言应严谨、真挚、有感染力
写作要点
第一段:
介绍背景,表明目的
第二段:
说明海洋的重要性
第三段:
发出保护海洋的倡议,并提出具体措施
观察与欣赏范文:
Our Oceans, Our Responsibility
June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day. It aims to raise people's awareness of protecting oceans.
It goes without saying that oceans play a critical role in the world. Not only do they provide abundant resources and food for us, but they are also crucial for the global climate development. Additionally, oceans are "the lungs of our planet", providing most of the oxygen we breathe.
As high school students, we are supposed to burden ourselves with the responsibility of protecting them. First of all, do what we can to make a difference. For example, stop throwing garbage into oceans. In addition, call on people around us to take action, too. I believe we will have cleaner oceans.
第一段:介绍背景,表明目的
June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day. It aims to raise people's awareness of protecting oceans.
话题相关词汇
aim to
raise people's awareness
protect oceans
第二段:说明海洋的重要性
It goes without saying that oceans play a critical role in the world. Not only do they provide abundant resources and food for us, but they are also crucial for the global climate development. Additionally, oceans are "the lungs of our planet", providing most of the oxygen we breathe.
话题相关词汇
It goes without saying that...
play a critical role in...
abundant resources
crucial
the global climate development
the lungs of our planet
起到连接作用的词汇:Not only...but also.... Additionally
第三段:发出保护海洋的倡议,并提出具体措施
As high schoo