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When my daughters reached the third and fourth grades,I sometimes allowed
them to walk to and from school alone if the weather permitted.One warm spring
day,a small friend followed them home after school.This friend had short legs and
long floppy ears,with a furry coat and tiny spots across her nose.She was the cutest
puppy (I had ever seen and my girls begged me to keep her.
She was not more than twelve weeks old.She had no identifying marks of any
sort.I didn't know what to do.I thought about running an ad in the lost and found but I
really didn't want to.It would break the kids'hearts if someone should show up.
Besides,her owners should have watched her more closely,I thought.
By the end of the week she was part of our family.She was very clever and good
with the girls.The Following week something told me to check the lost and found
section in the local paper.One particular ad caught my attention and my heart sank at
what I read.Someone was searching for a lost puppy near our grade school.They
sounded desperate.My hand shook.I could not ask myself to pick up the phone.
Instead.I pretend I hadn't seen the ad.I quickly put the paper aside and tried to
ignore it.I never say anything about it to the kids or my husband.
By now we had named the puppy.She looked like a Molly,so we called her
Molly.She followed the girls everywhere they went.When they went outside,she
was one step behind them.When they did housework she was there to help.
There was only one problem with this perfect dog:my conscience (was
bothering me.I knew in my heart I had to call that number and see if our Molly was
the puppy they were desperately looking for.
Para.1:With mixed feelings,I finally picked up the phone.
Para.2:Opening the door,I saw a woman with a little girl sitting in a small
wheelchair
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Bosic elements
who
1.a puppy dog
my daughters,G woman、
a little girl
when
where
what
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