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Chapter 2: Escape
Writing through Reading
从名著中学写作之理双线知走向————续写提纲写作
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storyline
emotion line
ending
outline of the ending
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Chapter 2: Escape
Writing through Reading
从名著中学写作之理双线知走向————续写提纲写作
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Main plot(What’s this story about?)
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The story is about a _________ called _________ who _________ from a ______.
pig
Wilbur
escaped
farm
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Characters:
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Settings(time and place):
Wilbur
one afternoon in June around a farm
Elements of the story
goose
Mrs. Z
Mr. Z
Lurvy
cocker spaniel
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Outline
Who did what.
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Emotion
How to conclude the outline
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happy/content/relaxed
nervous/frightened
Guess what happened next.
Wilbur looked around and found everybody was after him.
Wilbur said, “I don’t care. The food smelled so delicious.”
①Everybody was trying to catch him.
Mr. Z brought food.
②The goose warned him of losing freedom.
③Wilbur came back and ate the food.
④ending
Outline
①development
②preparation
③development
④ending
the beginning of the story
Tip2:
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Guess what happened next.
Wilbur looked around and found everybody was after him.
Wilbur said, “I don’t care. The food smelled so delicious.”
①Everybody was trying to catch him.
Mr. Z brought food.
②The goose warned him of losing freedom.
③Wilbur came back and ate the food.
④ending
Outline
happy/content/relaxed
nervous/frightened
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Wilbur walked up to the fence and saw that the goose was right—one board was loose. He put his head down, shut his eyes, and pushed. The board gave way. In a minute he had squeezed through the fence and was standing in the long grass outside his yard.
action 1
action 2
action 1
action 2
action 3
action 1
action 2
One character
action 1
action 2
action 3
Method 1:
Tip3:
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“That’s where you’re wrong, my friend,” said a voice.
Wilbur looked through the fence(栅栏) and saw the goose standing there.
“You don’t have to stay in that dirty-little yard,” said the goose, who talked rather fast.
“One of the boards is loose(松的). Pus