内容正文:
01高考原题
【2022年1月浙江卷】假定你是李华,参加了中国一爱尔兰文化节活动,结
识了爱尔兰朋友Chis,现他已经回国,你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:l.回忆
活动经历:2.分享个人所得;3.希望和他保持联系。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
02写前小思
1.因为是国与国之间的文化节,所以可以描写的“活动”有:艺术展,文
艺汇演,时装展,饮食文化交流,摄影展等。如能具体一些,例如摄影展
展出了什么时期的图片等,则会更好一些。
2.“个人收获”可以和具体活动放在一起写,即“活动+收获:活动+收获”
的模式;收获也可以写具体一些,而不是泛泛而谈,用诸如“have a better
understanding/gain a deeper insight into/broaden one's horizon/open my eyes"
之类的cliche。
3.刚认识的朋友间的个人邮件,用词需稍正式一些,因为还不是特别熟:
又要稍微casual一些,充当ice-breaker,为以后的进一步熟络打好基础。这
中间的尺寸,比较难以拿捏。例如要表达“很开心在那次文化节上和你成
为了好朋友”,如果翻译成“I'm exceedingly honored to have made your
acquaintance at the festival”就太formal了,现在学生们不会这样交流的啊!
简单的“I'm glad that we met at the festival and stayed in touch ever since”就
很符合李华的身份。
03
试写
Dear Christ,
How is everything?Though it's been a month since we first met at the
week-long Sino-Irish Cultural Exchange held in ShangHai,the activity remains
fresh in my memory.
The Youth Forum on the first day,in which teenagers from both countries
aired views on future life and social development,made me realize that united,
youth can make a real difference.What impressed me most was the art
performance on the last night,which featured Chinese and Irish folk dance and
music.Amazed at how different art forms could be so well integrated on one
stage,I can't wait to join in the festival to be held next year in Dublin and meet
you again!
Stay in touch and best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
在文中,我选取了两个活动:青年论坛和文艺表演。在如今疫情肆虐全
球的大背景下,体现出国与国之间交流与合作的重要性,而青年人,更应
该是这种沟通与协作的主角。此外,文艺汇演是能集中体现国家“文化”的
平台,在舞台上,舞蹈、音乐、小品等节目都能充分展现一国的文化精髓,
而两国艺术家同台表演,则能最好地体现中爱两国“文化”节的本质。
参考范文:
DearChris,
How are you doing?A few days having passed since your departure,
the Sino-Irish Cultural Festival where we got acquainted remains vivid in my
memory.How can I forget the good time we had in the concert which featured
Chinese and Irish folk music?How can I forget the fascinating art works
by amazing Irish artists?What impressed me most,however,was the tasty
Irish cuisines made with a variety of seafoods.
Personally,