考点03 读后续写之写好记叙文的句子（核心考点精讲精练）-备战2024年高考英语一轮复习考点帮（新高考专用）

考点03 读后续写之写好记叙文的句子（核心考点精讲精练） 读后续写的语言升级 考点1 利用词汇手段提升文章的表现力 考点2利用高级句式让人物形象栩栩如生 考点1 利用词汇手段提升文章的表现力 方法①把话写具体使语言更具表现力 ①Because of her hatred, she looked at him. →Because of her hatred, she glared at him. ②As scheduled, we participated in several good activities. →As scheduled, we participated in several instructive activities. 方法②使用高级词汇提高文章品质 ①The advice the old man gave Tom was very important. →The advice the old man gave Tom was very significant/vital/critical. ②I should be free any time after school next week. →I should be available any time after school next week. 方法③使用相关短语让表达更具体、更形象。 ①Hearing the bad news, the boy cried sadly. →Hearing the bad news, the boy burst into tears sadly. ②After a day's work, we all tired. →After a day's work, we all worn out. 方法④恰当使用非常形象地描述事物或反映细腻的感情色彩变化 ①The day was bitterly cold; the moon was shining brightly in the sky. ②Having no choice, I slowly raised the book, hoping to hide myself. ③I was quietly, joyfully and patiently watching as the sun painted a brand-new day. ④On our way back home, my father held me tightly, wearing a big frown. 方法⑤运用介词短语增加句子的多样性 ①She gazed up at him, glowing happily. →She gazed up at him, glowing with happiness. ②Like a lamp，the moon shone from above.The stars twinkled their eyes curiously. →Like a lamp，the moon shone from above.The stars twinkled their eyes with curiosity. 考点2利用高级句式让人物形象栩栩如生 一、描写外貌与性格的结构及句型 句型1 学会熟练使用with介词短语及with的复合结构，使人物外貌、性格表达活灵活现，生动形象。 典例1 ①She is a girl with a pair of black eyes.她是一个有一双黑眼睛的女孩。（介词短语作定语） ②She is a girl with lovely dimples on her round face.她是一个女孩，圆圆的脸上有几个可爱的小酒窝。（with的复合结构作定语） ③She is a girl with a pair of black eyes and lovely dimples on her round face. 她是一个女孩，有一双黑眼睛，圆圆的脸上有几个可爱的小酒窝。（综合使用介词结构作定语） 句型2 学会熟练使用定语从句，使人物外貌、性格表达信息更丰富。 典例2 ①He is a man with great determination.他是一个意志坚强的人。（with介词定语作定语） ②His perseverance is occasionally unimaginable. 有些时候他的毅力是你没法想象的。 ③He is a man with great determination, of whom the perseverance is occasionally unimaginable./ He is a