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Section Ⅵ Reading for Writing——建议信
一、黄金写作模板
二、常用写作格式
1.齐头式,即日期、正文、署名全在左边顶格写。教材中就采用了这种模式。
2.空格式:日期、署名在左边,正文每段开头空两格。
1.建议信开头常用句式
①I know you are now having trouble (in) communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.
我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦,你也可能经常感到孤独。
②I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.如果你听从以下建议,我认为你会做到的。
2.表达建议常用句式
①First(ly), why not join a club? If you do this, you can make friends.
首先,为什么不参加一个俱乐部?如果你这样做的话,就会交到朋友。
②Second(ly), you should/can try to talk with others.Then/That way, you will feel better.
其次,你应该尽力与人交谈。这样,你会感觉好点。
③As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, you should help each other.
就我而言/在我看来,你们应该互相帮助。
3.建议信结尾常用句式
①I hope you will find these ideas useful.
我希望你会发现这些办法有用。
②As time goes on, people will know you better and be willing to make friends with you if you can follow the above.
如果你遵从以上建议,随着时间的推移,人们会更加理解你,会愿意和你交朋友的。
假如你是李华,最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。她在信中说:由于刚进入高中还不能适应新环境,她不知道如何去结交新朋友,因而情绪低落。请你回信,内容如下:
1.向Jenny表示问候和安慰;
2.针对她的问题提出以下建议:
(1)放学后邀请同学一起参加活动;
(2)遇到困难时,互相帮助。
注意:可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
第一步:审题谋篇
第二步:要点翻译
1.你进入高中后情绪低落。
You feel bad __after__entering__high__school.
2.你的同学也面临着同样的问题。
Your classmates are facing__the__same__problem.
3.你不必太担心。
You don’t have to worry__too__much__about it.
4.尽力邀请你的同学一起参加一些活动。 通过相互交流有助于相互理解。
Try to invite your classmates to__take__part__in__some__activities__ together.It will help you understand each other better __by__communicating__with__them.
5.帮助有困难的同学。
Help students who__are__in__trouble.
第三步:词句升级
1.用因果关系结构连接要点2、3
Your__classmates__are__facing__the__same__problem,__so__you__don’t__have__to__worry__too__much__about__it.
2.用定语从句合并升级要点4
Try__to__invite__your__classmates__to__take__part__in__some__activities__together,__which__will__help__you__understand__each__other__better__by__communicating__with__them.
第四步:连句成篇
Dear Jenny,
I am sorry to hear you feel bad after entering high school.As far as I know, your classmates are facing the same problem, so you don’t have to worry too much about it.Here are so