专项训练(一)写作-【通城学典】2024年七年级英语暑期升级训练（译林版）

28 写 作 [典题在线] 亲情大片《你好,李焕英》感动了无数观众, 使我们想到自己身边的每个人。请你以“My ”为题,写一篇短文,从外貌、性格、爱 好等方面介绍自己身边熟悉的人,重点描述一 个曾经发生在你们之间的令人感动的故事。 要求:1. 短文应包括常见的人物介绍信息; 2. 文中不得出现真实信息;3. 词数80左右。 [审题谋篇] 这类话题作文,通常写人物的基本信息、兴 趣爱好、性格特点、在学习、工作方面的经历、能 力等相关信息。 体 裁 说明文 时 态 一般现在时 人 称 第三人称 要 点 (1) 简单介绍; (2) 重点描写(感动的故事); (3) 结语(体现情感) [写作提纲] [连词成句] 请选用方框中的关键词翻译下列句子。 rest free study hope healthy happy importance community centre used to day after day because of try to do sth. share sth.with sb. play computer games whenever seldom both experience be interested in 1. 他经常打篮球,因为他想有一个健康的 生活。 2. 对我来说,他既是我的父亲,也是我的朋友。 3. 我以前喜欢整夜不休息地玩电脑游戏,所以 我对学习不感兴趣。 4. 日复一日,我知道学习的重要性,很少玩电 脑游戏。 5. 因为他,我是世界上最幸福的人! [连句成篇] My father The person who loves me and helps me is my father. He is 39 years old. He is tal and strong. He is a teacher.He is friendly and energetic. ① In his free time, he like reading and helping in the community centre. ② He often plays basketbal. He wants to have a healthy life. ③ He is my father. He is also my friend. ④ I was used to like playing computer games al night without any rest, so I was not interested in study. Whenever he has time, he studies together with me and shares his own study experience with me. ⑤ Day after day, I know the important of study and seldom play computer games. ⑥ I􀆳m happy in the world because of him! I hope he􀆳l be healthy and happy forever. [名师点评] 本文符合人物介绍类文章的要求。开头点 明父亲这个人物;接着交代父亲的年龄、长相、 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 􀥈 英语(译林版)七年级 29 工作、兴趣爱好等,并举例说明他为作者做过的 事情;结尾说明作者的感受以及对父亲