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课时作业(三)
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答案解析Pm
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续
switched off the light and held an egg up to the
写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
cardboard tube."The light lets you see through the
[1]For my fifth-grade science fair project.I got
shell so you can watch the embryo(胚胎)develop.
six chicken eggs in an incubator(孵化器).
Look,see the dark spot here?"
[2]"But I don't know anything about hatching
[8]"Is that an embryo?"
negg.”
[9]“That'sit!”
[3]Mrs Brubeck smiled."You don't have to be
[10]Suddenly it felt real.The eggs were alive!
an immediate expert at everything,Juli.The idea
Surely they had to live!
here is to learn something new."
[11]For the next three weeks,I was completely
[4]“But what if they die?”
consumed with the growing of chicks.I labeled the
[5]"Then they die.Document your work
eggs A,B.C,D,E and F,but before long they had
scientifically and you'll still get an A.She pulled
names,too:Abby,Bonnie,Clyde,Dexter.Eunice
The Beginner's Guide to Raising Chickens from her
and Florence.Every day I weighed them,candled
bookshelf and said,"Read the book and set yourself
them,turned them.I drew diagrams of various
up tonight..”
stages of an embryo's development.I documented the
[6]That night I came home,more worried than
daily changes and weight loss of each egg.On the
ever.I'd read the book.I had to turn the eggs three
outside the eggs were boring,but I knew what was
times a day and regulate the temperature and humidity(
happening inside!
)But aside from that,what was there to do?
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
[7]My father came with a cardboard tube and a
Then one morning I was candling Bonnie when
flashlight.He taped the two together so that the
I noticed a gentle peck().
light beam was forced straight out the tube."I will
The day came when I was supposed to hand in
show you how to candle the eggs,"he said,then
my science fair project.
续写思路指引>
1.文本分析
主要人物
1.Mrs Brubeck.
(Abby,Bonnie.Clyde.Dexter.Eunice and Florence)
事件主线
讲述了作者的科学展览项目—解化鸡蛋实验
情感表达
[Para.6]
than ever[Para.10]felt
→[Para.11]
the