读后续写微技巧：细化动作过程讲义-2023届高考英语二轮复习

读后续写微技巧一一细化动作过程 策略1：动作分解，创造画面感 L.我生气地走出了房间。I went out of the room angrily 动作分解：yelled(叫喊)，slammed the door(摔门)，stormed/.rushed out of the room(冲出门外) 2.我原谅了他。I forgave him 动作分解：hugged(拥抱)，patted(轻拍)，whispered(低语) 3.他不情愿地向我道了款。He unwillingly apologized to me. 动作分解：dragged(拖)，bit one's mouth/ips(咬住嘴唇).mumbled(咕浓) 4.我开始演讲。I began my speech. 动作分解：glanced at(扫视)，took a breath(深呼吸)gathered my courage/.gathered myself(鼓起勇气) 策略2：连词与非谓语，串联动作。 1.我生气地走出了房间。 动作串联：and的连动结构。 I yelled at him furiously,slammed the door and stormed/rushed out of the room. 2.我原谅了他。 动作串联：谓语动词+非谓语结构。 I hugged him tightly,whispering to him that it was time to let it go. 3,他不情愿地向我道了款。 动作串联：非谓语结构+谓语动词。 Dragging himself to my seat,he bit his lip and mumbled an apology to me. 4.我开始演讲。 动作串联：状语从句。 When I quickly glanced at the audience,I took a deep breath and gathered my courage to start my speech 策略3：动词具体化，表达更传神 l.Mr.Bean takes out a card.puts it in an envelope and places(不用puts,避免 重复)it on the table. 2.It is clear..as he is chewing(不用eating,chewing有动作和声音感)that 3.He makes an attempt(不用tries,短语替换单词)to eat it.. 策略4：动词搭配修饰语，情绪更饱满 l.He then looks from the menu to the money with concern(动词搭配介词短 until he finds one thing... 2.He becomes so desperate(系动词搭配形容词)that he even hides., 3.He opens it to find.very happily（动词搭配副词)puts it on.… 表达积累： 手部动作 l.A strong hand reached out and caught hold of her arm.-只有力的手伸出来， 抓住了她的手臂。 2.Reaching into her pocket,.she brought out a coin.她伸手从兜里掏出一枚硬 币。 3.He scratched his head,.not understanding a word.他挠挠头，一个字也不懂。 4.With a reassuring pat on her arm,he left.他鼓励地拍拍了她的手臂，就离开 了。 5.He reached out and stroked/.touched her head tenderly/gently.他伸手，温柔地 摸摸了她的头。 6.He folded the papers and stuck them in his desk drawer.他将文件叠起来，塞 进自己书桌的抽屉里。 7.Seeing people hammering/knocking at his door,.I rushed out..看见有人在砰 砰地敲门，我冲了出去。 8.He took out(拿出)a piece of colourful dough,attached/stuck(把黏在) it to a small stick,creatively kneaded (and refined it.In the blink of an eye, a figurine(泥人)was made. 眼部动作 1.Tom s