内容正文:
►第06讲 亲情+友情类(讲义)
目录
目标1
亲情、友情类续写概述和写作步骤
目标2
冲突和矛盾纠结
目标3
化解冲突和矛盾
目标4
感情升华和领悟
目标5
最新模拟
目标6
真题感悟
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读后续写中常常会遇到人际关系及个人情感类的故事内容。如:父子关系、母子关系、师生关系、同学友情、朋友关系等之间涉及家人、朋友、邻居、亲戚或他人之间的情感沟通或交流。此类文章中常含有涉及个人的喜、怒、哀、乐、害怕、紧张、孤单、骄傲、喜悦等细节描写。
【写作步骤】
一 冲突和矛盾纠结
1. 生气、震惊
be displeased at one ’s conduct 对某人的行为感到不满
arouse one’s displeasure 引起某人的不快
be easily annoyed at trifles容易为琐事而恼火
flame with anger气得满脸通红
get cross/mad at sb.对某人勃然大怒
be speechless with indignation气的说不出话来
be deeply shocked at her behaviour对她的行为深为震惊
1. I was seized by anger.我充满了愤怒。
2. His voice trembled with anger. 他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
3. Filled with anger/fury(狂怒),Tom was unable to utter a single word.
Tom气得一句话也说不出。
4. Boiling with rage,Tom shook his fist at me.
Tom怒火中烧,对我挥舞拳头。
5.Seeing this, he was filled/ bursting with anger.
看到这些,他怒不可遏。
6.Feeling a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her, Jessica threw the can at the woman.
Jessica 感到一股强烈的嫉妒在心中升腾、奔涌,她把易拉罐扔向那个女人。
7.What he said pierced my heart.
他说的话刺痛了我的心。
8.He was filled/ bursting with anger and storm out of the room.
他怒不可遏,气冲冲地走出了房间。
9. Finding Clark's note in a mess, his teacher was blue in the face.
发现Clark的笔记一团糟,他的老师脸气得发青。
10.My jaw dropped when I saw my phone bill.
当看到电话账单时,我极为惊讶。
2. 孤单、消极
1. He feels abandoned by the world.
他觉得自己被全世界抛弃了。
2. I have a strong sense of loss after my divorce.
离婚后我感到有很强的失落感。
3.He felt left out and was getting desperate with loneliness.
他感觉被遗弃了,孤独使他感到绝望。
4.Upon hearing the bad news, he was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness.
听到这个坏消息,他突然被投入黑暗世界,陷入绝望。
5. Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly.
一听到这个坏消息,她就被一股悲伤之感控制,忍不住哭泣。
6. He sighed with disappointment.
他失望地叹了口气。
7.With a confused look on his face, he had no idea what to do.
他露出困惑的表情,不知道该做什么。
8.Amanda felt as gray as the sky outside when she looked across the table at