第05讲 读后续写之“助人类”主题（讲义）-2024年高考英语一轮复习讲练测（新教材新高考）

►第05讲 助人类（讲义） 目录 目标1 助人类续写概述和写作步骤 目标2 困难处境来铺垫 目标3 消极情绪来烘托 目标4 助人过程来描写 目标5 感激、感动来升华 目标6 最新模拟 目标7 真题感悟 _____________________________________________________________________ 读后续写中常常会遇到自己帮助别人或者自己受到他人帮助的故事情节，我们就把这类文章归为“脱险型”。在近年高考真题中，如2022年新高考I卷鼓励David越野跑；2020年新高考I卷帮助他人渡过难关等。 【写作步骤】 一 困难处境来铺垫 1. The water was deep and running fast from a big rainstorm the night before. 暴雨，水又深又急。 2. A thick burning smell filled the air.  空气里弥漫着浓厚灼热的味道。 3. I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass. 我试图从洞里爬出来，但当我的膝盖跪在冰上时，它就像窗户玻璃一样断裂了。 4. As flames shot at his feet, he broke the window’s glass with his bare hand. Blood flowed from between his fingers and he ignored the pain. 当火焰射向他的脚边时，他徒手打破了窗户的玻璃。血从他的手指间流出，他没有理会疼痛。 5. The doorway was sealed by fire. The glass of the window was broken, some smoke ran out of the window, and there was less smoke in the house. 门口被火封住了。窗户的玻璃被打碎了，窗外有一些烟，房子里的烟也少了。 6. Catherine said to her followers with sincerity, “I’ll continue to distribute the cards and bags to the homeless on the street and at local shelter.” 凯瑟琳真诚地对她的追随者们说：“我将继续把这些卡片和包分发给街上和当地收容所的无家可归者。” 二 消极情绪来烘托 感到一阵....../一种......情绪袭来 情绪名词+flooded over sb; swept over sb a wave of...; a feeling of; a sense of...; a flush of... 情绪名词：joy/shame /guilt /excitement /pride /anger /rage /panic /terror /sorrow/ embarrassment /dispointment /sadness /sorrow /grief /fear... 因......颤抖 主语+tremble/shake/shiver /quiver...with fear/panic/rage/anger/excitement/horror/fright... 进一步细节描写(通常是肢体五官等细节来展现) 1. Tears rolled down my eyes/cheeks. 泪水模糊了双眼/留下脸颊。 2. Watching the shore in the distance, I felt powerless as if we were broken tiny boats at the mercy of strong waves. 看着远处的海岸，我感到无力（无力的），就好像我们是被强浪摧毁的小船。 3. Exhausted and cold, the thought that we might die here flashed across my mind,which made me quiver with an uncontrollable terror/horror/fright. 疲惫而冰冷，我们可能死在这里的想法在我的脑海中闪现，这使我因一种无法控制的恐惧/恐惧/恐惧而颤抖。 4. Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of